Re: PROV-ISSUE-512: Data Model Section 5.1.5 (Example 21) [prov-dm]

Hi all,

Here is the proposed change for this issue.
Feedback welcome.

Cheers,
Luc


      ISSUE-512 (FinePayingExample)

    * Original email:
      http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-prov-wg/2012Sep/0102.html
    * Tracker: http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/512
    * Group Response
          o Suggestion implemented.
    * References:
    * Changes to the document: http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/rev/e89828e2a81c
    * Original author's acknowledgement:



On 10/09/2012 09:42, Provenance Working Group Issue Tracker wrote:
> PROV-ISSUE-512: Data Model Section 5.1.5 (Example 21)   [prov-dm]
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> http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/512
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> Raised by: Luc Moreau
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> http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/wiki/LC_Feedback#Data_Model_Section_5.1.5_.28Example_21.29
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> ISSUE-463
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> Suggest changing the type within the statement for activity 2 to simply read "paying fine", as the supporting text enumerates the various activities that might be involved with that.
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