- From: Luc Moreau <L.Moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk>
- Date: Fri, 09 Mar 2012 16:58:08 +0000
- To: Yolanda Gil <gil@ISI.EDU>
- CC: public-prov-wg@w3.org
Hi Yolanda, Following the release of WD4.internal, I believe this issue is now addressed. See http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-dm-20120309/prov-dm.html#prov-dm-example I propose to close the issue now. Let us know what you think. Regards, Luc On 10/20/2011 07:45 PM, Provenance Working Group Issue Tracker wrote: > PROV-ISSUE-132 (YolandaGil): Improve the examples to make them more intuitive and of broader appeal in Provenance Data Model (PROV-DM) Draft [Data Model] > > http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/132 > > Raised by: Yolanda Gil > On product: Data Model > > It seems to me we are using non-intuitive or incomplete notions in the examples, which will make our documents that much harder to be understood and therefore the standard adopted. I would suggest to use one or two scenarios of broad interest, for example publishing a web page that has diverse and rich content, or an example with linked data. > > For instance, in Section 4.2: It says "A file is read by a process execution". The fact that a file being read is a ProcessExecution seems to me to be a very contrived example (I don't think we've ever discussed a provenance scenario where file reading was considered, because there are other more pressing processes to represent). > > Another case: if evt1, evt2, etc are timestamps, why not label them t1, t2, etc so they don't have a label that makes them look like events? > > Another case: Somewhere it mentions "spellchecked" as an attribute, if so we should really show how the spellchecker program plays a role in the provenance record so this attribute becomes so. > > Another case: all the examples of agents are people, but agents can be other things (eg the Royal Society that is used in another section). > > > > > > -- Professor Luc Moreau Electronics and Computer Science tel: +44 23 8059 4487 University of Southampton fax: +44 23 8059 2865 Southampton SO17 1BJ email: l.moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk United Kingdom http://www.ecs.soton.ac.uk/~lavm
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