- From: James Cheney <jcheney@inf.ed.ac.uk>
- Date: Thu, 5 Jul 2012 17:48:08 +0100
- To: Provenance Working Group <public-prov-wg@w3.org>
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> Question for reviewers: Can the document be published as Last Call working draft?
Yes, but please take note of suggestions below.
0. I don't understand the rationale for deciding who is an author. I believe it is up to the editors, but there are some things that I've helped with here, and I'm not listed (examples: definitions of specialization/alternate, and semicolon syntax for optional identifiers). I haven't directly written much so wouldn't fight to be included, but at this point I have probably done more than for PROV-O, where I am listed as an author. (I also wouldn't fight to stay listed there but am happy to stay listed.)
Also, should some of the authors of PROV-DM also be listed on PROV-N or PROV-CONSTRAINTS, since they were split up? Having become an editor of the latter only recently, I would like to make sure we credit people that contributed to it.
1. S5, "itself dependen on" - spelling
2. Table 5 and sec. 5.6.2: I have trouble reading "memberOf(c,{e1,...,en})" - the elements e1,...,en are members of c, not the other way around.
Moreover, I don't understand why memberOf needs to be so complex, with an id and attributes, if it is just a "hook" for linking up with other vocabularies that have membership. Why not just "memberOf(element, collection)"? This is what I thought we agreed at f2f3. We could also omit EmptyCollection and the completeness flag.
3. Figure 7 and 7b: I suggest renumbering, or renaming "Figure 7" to "Figure 7a"
4. S5.3.5. "capacity an entity" -> "capacity of an entity"
5. Example 45. I am afraid I don't understand how the current definition of mentionOf accommodates the example. Why doesn't bondle tool:analysis1 rate the two activities Bob was associated with (or the associations themselves) rather than rating (different mentions of) Bob?
6. In example 46 (which I'm also not sure I understand, but never mind), the bundles in mentionOf are the second arguments, I think they should be third.
7. I would also suggest that the bundle in mentionOf should be mandatory, not optional.
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