Re: PROV-ISSUE-331: feedback on PROV-Dm WD5

Hi Graham,
Could you please provide us with the wording issues you have?
Thanks,
Luc

On 04/06/2012 08:51 PM, Graham Klyne wrote:
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> == 2.2, et seq. ==
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> I find similar issues with the wording of subsequent sections, but I 
> haven't gone through every one for lack of time.  But I hope you get 
> the general thrust from the above.
>

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