Cheers, Alan Chapell Chapell & Associates 917 318 8440 On 9/18/16, 12:49 PM, "Kepeng Li" <kepeng.lkp@alibaba-inc.com> wrote: Hi Chaals, Thanks for your edits. It is quite helpful. I made some further edits based on your proposed changes. About your embedded questions, we can discuss them during the PING meeting on Tuesday. Kind Regards Kepeng ------------------------------------------------------------------ 发件人:<chaals@yandex-team.ru> 日 期:2016年09月16日 01:38:52 收件人:Kepeng Li<kepeng.lkp@alibaba-inc.com>; public-privacy@w3.org<public-privacy@w3.org> 主 题:Re: Privacy protection principles - runnegar@, tjwhalen@ Hi Kepeng, all, I made a few minor edits, mostly shuffling things that seemed to belong in a different place, or trying to simplify the language. One of the things I did is change "privacy information" in some places to "private information", and in other places to "privacy-sensitive information". "privacy information" sounds wrong to me, but I am not sure what a better phrase would be. Feel free to over-write any of my edits... cheers Chaals 15.09.2016, 17:11, "Kepeng Li" <kepeng.lkp@alibaba-inc.com>: > Hi Christine, Tara and all, > > I just submitted an initial proposal for privacy protection principles: > https://www.w3.org/wiki/Privacy/Privacy_protection_principles > > I hope we can allocate some time in TPAC PING IG to discuss that, to see > if it is valuable to continue to work on this subject. > > Thanks and see you in TPAC! > > Kind Regards > > Kepeng Li > Alibaba -- Charles McCathie Nevile - web standards - CTO Office, Yandex chaals@yandex-team.ru - - - Find more at http://yandex.comReceived on Sunday, 18 September 2016 18:12:29 UTC
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