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Typos in the PR document of ODRL Information Model 2.2

From: 上綱秀治 <ax2s-kmtn@asahi-net.or.jp>
Date: Sun, 14 Jan 2018 09:04:10 +0100
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Dear Sir and Madam

This is Shuji Kamitsuna@Japan.

I found some possible typos below in the PR document of ODRL Information Model 2.2. at
https://www.w3.org/TR/2018/PR-odrl-model-20180104/

Sec. 2.3.1: "the recipient the Rule" might be "the recipient of the Rule".
Sec. 2.3.3, in the Example Use Case: "would the assignee" might be "would be the assignee".
Sec. 2.6: "disjoint will all other..." might be "disjoint with all other...".
Sec. 2.6.7, in the Example Use Case: "will be that the MUST" might be "will be that it MUST" or "will be that he/she MUST".
Sec. 3.3: "a subclass the ODRL Policy class" might be "a subclass of the ODRL Policy class".

Thank you for the great specification!

Best Regards,

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KAMITSUNA, Shuji.
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