- From: 上綱秀治 <ax2s-kmtn@asahi-net.or.jp>
- Date: Sun, 14 Jan 2018 09:04:10 +0100
- To: public-poe-comments@w3.org
Received on Sunday, 14 January 2018 08:04:18 UTC
Dear Sir and Madam This is Shuji Kamitsuna@Japan. I found some possible typos below in the PR document of ODRL Information Model 2.2. at https://www.w3.org/TR/2018/PR-odrl-model-20180104/ Sec. 2.3.1: "the recipient the Rule" might be "the recipient of the Rule". Sec. 2.3.3, in the Example Use Case: "would the assignee" might be "would be the assignee". Sec. 2.6: "disjoint will all other..." might be "disjoint with all other...". Sec. 2.6.7, in the Example Use Case: "will be that the MUST" might be "will be that it MUST" or "will be that he/she MUST". Sec. 3.3: "a subclass the ODRL Policy class" might be "a subclass of the ODRL Policy class". Thank you for the great specification! Best Regards, -- ******************* KAMITSUNA, Shuji. ax2s-kmtn@asahi-net.or.jp http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~ax2s-kmtn/
Received on Sunday, 14 January 2018 08:04:18 UTC