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[poe] Typos in the PR document of ODRL Information Model 2.2

From: Ivan Herman via GitHub <sysbot+gh@w3.org>
Date: Sun, 14 Jan 2018 08:10:19 +0000
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iherman has just created a new issue for https://github.com/w3c/poe:

== Typos in the PR document of ODRL Information Model 2.2 ==
(Recording the issue originally [submitted by email](https://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-poe-comments/2018Jan/0000.html) but Shuji Kamitsuna)

Dear Sir and Madam

This is Shuji Kamitsuna@Japan.

I found some possible typos below in the PR document of ODRL Information Model 2.2. at

* [ ] Sec. 2.3.1: "the recipient the Rule" might be "the recipient of the Rule". 
* [ ] Sec. 2.3.3, in the Example Use Case: "would the assignee" might be "would be the assignee". 
* [ ] Sec. 2.6: "disjoint will all other..." might be "disjoint with all other...". 
* [ ] Sec. 2.6.7, in the Example Use Case: "will be that the MUST" might be "will be that it MUST" or "will be that he/she MUST". 
* [ ] Sec. 3.3: "a subclass the ODRL Policy class" might be "a subclass of the ODRL Policy class". 

Thank you for the great specification!

Cc: @riannella 

Please view or discuss this issue at https://github.com/w3c/poe/issues/288 using your GitHub account
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