Re: [poe] Reviews of ODRL IM - Editor's Draft 3 August 2017

**Re Profile**

* re 2.1 Policy Class
  * Now 1: A Policy MAY have none or one profile property  ...
Should be 1: A Policy MAY have **none, one or many** profile properties ...
  * Now 2: Use an ODRL Profile that declares the supported vocabulary expressed in the Policy.
Should be 2: Use an ODRL Profile that declares the supported vocabulary **used by expressions** in the Policy. (Comment: a Policy does not express vocabularies.)
* re 4. ODRL Profiles
  * Now 1: An ODRL Profile explicitly serves a communities needs by ...
Should be 1: An ODRL Profile explicitly serves **community** needs by ...
  * Now 2: These terms may be defined explicitly or may be reused from the ODRL Common Vocabulary. 
Should be 2: These terms may be defined explicitly or may be **adopted** from the ODRL Common Vocabulary. (Comment: "adopted" clarifies more that a Profile needs an explicit statement to make a term of the Common Vocabulary part of it.)
  * Now 3: Additional Actions for Rules: ... of a Action
Should be 3: Additional Actions for Rules: ... of **an** Action
  * open issue re "All new classes ... must also be defined as a skos:Concept": is there a need to create skos:Collection for all instanced of e.g. Actions, Left Operand ... defined by a Profile. (They are defined this way by the Core Vocabulary.)


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