Re: Personalization TF CR announcement - adding semantic reference

Hi all,

This looks great (the updates are really helpful). Just a couple of things I noticed.

> Learn more from the Personalization Overview.

"Personalization Overview" is coded as a link in the email, but I gather this is meant to be a plain-text document, so the link will be lost.

> For in-progress updates to the document, see the Editor's Drafts at:

"Document" should be pluralised, as links to two separate documents are given.

Best regards,


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On 10/11/2021, 21:48, "Lionel Wolberger" <lionel@userway.org> wrote:

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    Looks good to me: any further improvements? 

     Lionel Wolberger
    COO, UserWay Inc.lionel@userway.orgUserWay.org <http://userway.org/>






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    On Wed, Nov 10, 2021 at 11:41 PM Sharon D Snider <snidersd@us.ibm.com> wrote:


    Hi all,

    Below is the updated draft of the Personalization announcement and news with edits to the background section as discussed in this email thread. 

    ----------- Start of draft announcement -----------

    Personalization Semantics Content Module 1.0(CR)and Personalization Semantics Explainer(Updated WD)

    * Expected date: [date] 2021
    * Contact(s): Sharon Snider<snidersd@us.ibm.com>, Lionel Wolberger<lionel@userway.org>, Janina Sajka <janina@rednote.net>, Becky Gibson <gibson.becky@gmail.com> and Roy Ran <ran@w3.org> 
    * Draft document: Personalization Semantics Content Module 1.0 <https://w3c.github.io/personalization-semantics/content/> and Personalization Semantics Explainer <https://w3c.github.io/personalization-semantics/>


    WAI E-mail - Personalization Semantics Content Module 1.0(CR) and Personalization Semantics Explainer(Updated WD)

    W3C WAI invites you to comment on the Candidate Release of:
         Personalization Semantics Content Module 1.0 
        https://www.w3.org/TR/personalization-semantics-content-1.0/


    And an Updated Working Draft of:
        Personalization Semantics Explainer
        https://www.w3.org/TR/personalization-semantics-1.0/



    Background: Personalization enables users to customize the way information is presented with a small addition of machine-readable semantic metadata. This is especially useful for people with cognitive and learning disabilities, as it will support a range of helpful content adaptations. Learn more from the Personalization Overview <https://www.w3.org/WAI/personalization/>.

    Personalization Semantics Content Module 1.0(CR) and Personalization Semantics Explainer(Updated WD) - Call for Review

    For in-progress updates to the document, see the Editor's Drafts at:

    * https://w3c.github.io/personalization-semantics/content/

    * https://w3c.github.io/personalization-semantics <https://w3c.github.io/personalization-semantics/content/>

    Note: This specification currently relies on the "data-" attribute as provided for in HTML 5, Sec. 3.2.6.6 and cannot advance beyond this stage using that attribute. APA has initiated the process for a permanent resolution that would allow this specification to advance to recommendation status. After that resolution has been agreed upon updated drafts will be published containing the newly agreed syntactic approach. Implementors are cautioned to expect this one time change in the coming months.
        https://html.spec.whatwg.org/multipage/dom.html#embedding-custom-non-visible-data-with-the-data-*-attributes



    To comment, please open a new issue in the personalization-semantics
    GitHub repository:
        https://github.com/w3c/personalization-semantics/issues/new

        If it's not feasible for you to use GitHub, send comments in email to:         
        public-personalization-tf@w3.org.

    Please send comments by [date] 2021.

    Thank you in advance for your comments.

    Regards, 
    Janina Sajka, APA Working Group Co-Chair
    Becky Gibson, APA Working Group Co-Chair
    Sharon Snider, Personalization Task Force Co-Facilitator
    Lionel Wolberger, Personalization Task Force Co-Facilitator
    Michael Cooper, W3C Staff Contact for APA Working Group
    Roy Ran, W3C Staff Contact for APA Working Group

    W3C News - Personalization Semantics Content Module 1.0 and Personalization Semantics Explainer

    Heading: 

    *     CR: Personalization Semantics Content Module 1.0 Candidate Recommendation
    *     Updated WD: Personalization Semantics Explainer Updated Working Draft 

    The Accessible Platform Architecture Personalization Task Force has published the Personalization Semantics Content Module 1.0 for Candidate Recommendation. This specification provides web content authors a standard approach to support web users who are persons with various cognitive and learning disabilities. The technology described in this specification is intended to be used to programmatically transform the appearance of typical web content including form controls, icons, and other user interface elements into a rendering more familiar and comprehensible to an individual user. 

    The Accessible Platform Architecture Personalization Task Force has also published an Updated Working Draft of the Personalization Semantics Explainer. This document provides use cases and explanations for understanding how the personalization attributes are used to personalize an accessible web site for persons with various cognitive and learning disabilities. Comments are welcome through [date] 2021.

     ----------- End of draft email announcement -----------


    Thanks all for your review and input, 
    Sharon Snider 
    IBM Design ► IBM Accessibility Leadership Team
    (512)965-3957
    www.ibm.com/able <https://www.ibm.com/able> and w3.ibm.com/able <https://w3.ibm.com/able>











    ----- Original message -----
    From: "Lionel Wolberger" <lionel@userway.org>
    To: "John Foliot" <john@foliot.ca>
    Cc: "Sharon D Snider" <snidersd@us.ibm.com>, "public-personalization-tf" <public-personalization-tf@w3.org>
    Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: Personalization TF CR announcement - adding semantic reference
    Date: Tue, Nov 9, 2021 4:00 AM

    +1 Anyone else have improvements? On Mon, Nov 8, 2021 at 21:14 John Foliot <john@foliot.ca> wrote: Hi Lionel If I may... "Personalization enables users to customize the way information is presented with a small addition of machine-readable ZjQcmQRYFpfptBannerStart This Message Is From an External Sender
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    +1
    Anyone else have improvements?
      On Mon, Nov 8, 2021 at 21:14 John Foliot <john@foliot.ca> wrote:

    Hi Lionel  
    If I may... 

    "Personalization enables users to customize the way information is presented with a small addition of machine-readable semantic metadata. This is especially useful for people with cognitive and learning disabilities, as it will support a range of helpful content adaptations. Learn more from the Personalization Overview."



    FWIW.

    JF

      On Mon, Nov 8, 2021 at 1:46 PM Lionel Wolberger <lionel@userway.org> wrote:

    As discussed, I am proposing edits on the Background.  
    Current Background: Personalization enables users to customize the way information is presented. It is especially useful for people with cognitive and learning disabilities. For a short introduction to personalization and additional documentation you can learn more from the Personalization Overview.

    Aim of change: adding some of the great line, We've developed a specification that will help content authors do this, where a small addition of machine-readable semantic metadata supports a range of helpful adaptations.

    Proposing: 

    Personalization enables users to customize the way information is presented with a small addition of machine-readable semantic metadata. Especially useful for people with cognitive and learning disabilities, it supports a range of helpful adaptations. Learn more from the Personalization Overview.




      On Thu, Nov 4, 2021 at 8:57 PM Sharon D Snider <snidersd@us.ibm.com> wrote:

    Hi all,

    Below is the updated draft of the Personalization announcement and news with edits based on the announcement template and SAUR example. Also note, that we will need to fill in the correct dates in three places in the draft marked as [date] 2021.

    ----------- Start of draft announcement -----------

    Personalization Semantics Content Module 1.0(CR)and Personalization Semantics Explainer(Updated WD)

    * Expected date: [date] 2021
    * Contact(s): Sharon Snider<snidersd@us.ibm.com>, Lionel Wolberger<lionel@userway.org>, Janina Sajka <janina@rednote.net>, Becky Gibson <becky@knowbility.org> and Roy Ran <ran@w3.org> 
    * Draft document: Personalization Semantics Content Module 1.0 <https://w3c.github.io/personalization-semantics/content/> and Personalization Semantics Explainer <https://w3c.github.io/personalization-semantics/>


    WAI E-mail - Personalization Semantics Content Module 1.0(CR) and Personalization Semantics Explainer(Updated WD)

    W3C WAI invites you to comment on the Candidate Release of:
         Personalization Semantics Content Module 1.0 
        https://www.w3.org/TR/personalization-semantics-content-1.0/


    And an Updated Working Draft of:
        Personalization Semantics Explainer
        https://www.w3.org/TR/personalization-semantics-1.0/



    Background: Personalization enables users to customize the way information is presented. It is especially useful for people with cognitive and learning disabilities. For a short introduction to personalization and additional documentation you can learn more from the Personalization Overview <https://www.w3.org/WAI/personalization/>.

    Personalization Semantics Content Module 1.0(CR) and Personalization Semantics Explainer(Updated WD) - Call for Review

    For in-progress updates to the document, see the Editor’s Drafts at:

    * https://w3c.github.io/personalization-semantics/content/

    * https://w3c.github.io/personalization-semantics <https://w3c.github.io/personalization-semantics/content/>

    Note: This specification currently relies on the "data-" attribute as provided for in HTML 5, Sec. 3.2.6.6 and cannot advance beyond this stage using that attribute. APA has initiated the process for a permanent resolution that would allow this specification to advance to recommendation status. After that resolution has been agreed upon updated drafts will be published containing the newly agreed syntactic approach. Implementors are cautioned to expect this one time change in the coming months.
        https://html.spec.whatwg.org/multipage/dom.html#embedding-custom-non-visible-data-with-the-data-*-attributes



    To comment, please open a new issue in the personalization-semantics
    GitHub repository:
        https://github.com/w3c/personalization-semantics/issues/new

        If it’s not feasible for you to use GitHub, send comments in email to:         
        public-personalization-tf@w3.org.

    Please send comments by [date] 2021.

    Thank you in advance for your comments.

    Regards, 
    Janina Sajka, APA Working Group Co-Chair
    Becky Gibson, APA Working Group Co-Chair
    Sharon Snider, Personalization Task Force Co-Facilitator
    Lionel Wolberger, Personalization Task Force Co-Facilitator
    Michael Cooper, W3C Staff Contact for APA Working Group
    Roy Ran, W3C Staff Contact for APA Working Group

    W3C News - Personalization Semantics Content Module 1.0 and Personalization Semantics Explainer

    Heading: 

    *     CR: Personalization Semantics Content Module 1.0 Candidate Recommendation
    *     Updated WD: Personalization Semantics Explainer Updated Working Draft 


    The Accessible Platform Architecture Personalization Task Force has published the Personalization Semantics Content Module 1.0 for Candidate Recommendation. This specification provides web content authors a standard approach to support web users who are persons with various cognitive and learning disabilities. The technology described in this specification is intended to be used to programmatically transform the appearance of typical web content including form controls, icons, and other user interface elements into a rendering more familiar and comprehensible to an individual user. 

    The Accessible Platform Architecture Personalization Task Force has also published an Updated Working Draft of the Personalization Semantics Explainer. This document provides use cases and explanations for understanding how the personalization attributes are used to personalize an accessible web site for persons with various cognitive and learning disabilities. Comments are welcome through [date] 2021.

     ----------- End of draft email announcement -----------


    Regards, 
    Sharon Snider 
    IBM Design ► IBM Accessibility Leadership Team
    (512)965-3957
    www.ibm.com/able <https://www.ibm.com/able> and w3.ibm.com/able <https://w3.ibm.com/able>











    ----- Original message -----
    From: "Lionel Wolberger" <lionel@userway.org>
    To: "public-personalization-tf" <public-personalization-tf@w3.org>
    Cc: "Sharon D Snider" <snidersd@us.ibm.com>
    Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: Draft review: Personalization TF CR announcement
    Date: Mon, Sep 27, 2021 10:04 AM

    We discussed this draft in today's Personalization TF meeting. We also looked at the SAUR FPWD Announcement, to show us some additional messaging that we need for our CR announcement. Roy will provide either a readable version, or a login, ZjQcmQRYFpfptBannerStart This Message Is From an External Sender
    This message came from outside your organization.


    ZjQcmQRYFpfptBannerEnd We discussed this draft in today's Personalization TF meeting.  We also looked at the SAUR FPWD Announcement, to show us some additional messaging that we need for our CR announcement. 

    Roy will provide either a readable version, or a login, so we co-facilitators can "steal" the best ideas from this SAUR announcement and enrich our own. 

        Lionel Wolberger
    COO, UserWay Inc.lionel@userway.org UserWay.org <http://userway.org/>











      On Mon, Sep 20, 2021 at 7:09 PM Sharon D Snider <snidersd@us.ibm.com> wrote:

    Hi all,

    Below is a first draft of the Personalization "CR publication of Personalization Semantics Content Module 1.0 and WD of Personalization Semantics Explainer" announcement. It is based on the prior announcement <https://www.w3.org/WAI/cc/wiki/WAI_Announcement_Drafts#WAI_E-mail_-_Personalization_Semantics> that had been planned for 2020. There was also a note that the Personalization Overview page needs to be updated as well, so we'll need to add it to the Personalization TF agenda for discussion.

    Please review and provide feedback. 

    ----------- Start of draft email announcement  -----------

    Dear WAI Interest Group Announce List Participants, 
    The Personalization Semantics Task Force and the Accessible Platform Architectures (APA) Working Group announce publication of a Candidate Recommendation (CR) draft of: 

    * Personalization Semantics Content Module 1.0 specification:

         https://www.w3.org/TR/personalization-semantics-content-1.0/


    We are also announcing an updated working draft publication of: 

    * Personalization Semantics Explainer

         https://www.w3.org/TR/personalization-semantics-1.0/

    What is Personalization: Personalization enables users to customize the way information is presented. It is especially useful for people with cognitive and learning disabilities. For a short introduction to personalization and the different documents, see the 

    * Personalization Overview

        https://www.w3.org/WAI/personalization/


    Status and wide review: APA believes the Personalization Semantics Content Module 1.0 specification is ready to advance to the next step toward becoming a W3C recommendation. This means that implementations of this specification are welcome, as well as comments on the CR draft. 
    Please note that this specification currently relies on the "data-" attribute as provided for in HTML 5, Sec. 3.2.6.6 <http://3.2.6.6>: 
    https://html.spec.whatwg.org/multipage/dom.html#embedding-custom-non-visible-data-with-the-data-*-attributes


    However, this specification cannot advance beyond this stage using that attribute. APA has initiated the process for a permanent resolution that would allow this specification to advance to recommendation status. Once that resolution has been agreed an updated Candidate Recommendation draft will be published containing the newly agreed syntactic approach. Implementors are cautioned to expect this one time change in the coming months. 
    Comments: To comment, file an issue in the personalization semantics GitHub repository: 
        https://github.com/w3c/personalization-semantics/issues/new

    If this is not feasible, send email to public-personalization-tf@w3.org. Please send comments by [date] 2020. 
    Thanking you in advance, 
    Janina & Becky, APA Co-Chairs Lionel & Sharon, Personalization Task Force Facilitators, Roy & Michael, Staff Contacts
    ----------- End of draft email announcement -----------



    Thank you, 
    Sharon Snider 
    IBM Design ► IBM Accessibility Leadership Team
    (512)965-3957
    www.ibm.com/able <https://www.ibm.com/able> and w3.ibm.com/able <https://w3.ibm.com/able>




























    -- John Foliot | 
    Senior Industry Specialist, Digital Accessibility |
    W3C Accessibility Standards Contributor |

    "I made this so long because I did not have time to make it shorter." - Pascal "links go places, buttons do things"






    --  Lionel Wolberger
    COO, UserWay Inc.lionel@userway.org UserWay.org <http://userway.org/>

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