Edits and review

Colleagues

As part of my larger action item, I have made editorial (red-line) updates
to both the Explainer and the first module (Content). One issue I
discovered (a known issue that the W3C is working on) is that the
publishing mechanism at  https://w3c.github.io
<https://w3c.github.io/personalization-semantics/> is not working properly.
I've spoken with Roy, who is seeking to accelerate this concern at W3M
(PLH).

In the interim, editorial changes can be found at:

   - *Explainer* -
   https://raw.githack.com/w3c/personalization-semantics/main/explainer.html
   - *Content *-
   https://raw.githack.com/w3c/personalization-semantics/main/content/index.html


If y'all can take a quick peek *before *Monday, and if you see any concerns
please let me know. (NOTE, the uppermost section of both documents, which
lists which version this is - the URL - remains broken. Please ignore the
indicated URLs - the URLs hosted at w3c.github.io - at this time.)

JF
-- 
*John Foliot* | Senior Industry Specialist, Digital Accessibility

"I made this so long because I did not have time to make it shorter." -
Pascal "links go places, buttons do things"