- From: Becky Gibson <becky@knowbility.org>
- Date: Thu, 13 Aug 2020 13:56:14 -0400
- To: public-personalization-tf <public-personalization-tf@w3.org>
Received on Thursday, 13 August 2020 17:56:29 UTC
Based on feedback from Janina I took another pass at the explainer. I worked at simplifying some of the sentences and making the verbs more action oriented. The changes are mainly in the introduction and the use cases sections. Please review so we can hopefully discuss at the next meeting. https://raw.githack.com/w3c/personalization-semantics/explainer-compare/explainer.html <https://raw.githack.com/w3c/personalization-semantics/explainer-compare/explainer.html> Changes are in the explainer-compare branch. Differences can be seen at https://github.com/w3c/personalization-semantics/compare/explainer-compare <https://github.com/w3c/personalization-semantics/compare/explainer-compare> best, -becky Becky Gibson Sr. Accessibility Strategist Knowbility.org The World Wide Web Consortium (W3C), Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) Co-Chair, Accessible Platform Architectures http://www.w3.org/wai/apa
Received on Thursday, 13 August 2020 17:56:29 UTC