Re: CfC to publish documents as FPWD of the Web Payments WG

Along these lines.... and not to bury the working group in administrativia,
but I am super open to adopting a working model like the following:


   - Propose changes via PR
   - Debate PRs until agreed or rejected
   - Merge PRs that are agreed
   - Automatically rev the WD via Echidna (W3C publication tool that just
   works) daily if there are merges.


Again, this is just a way of doing publications post-FPWD.  A lot of W3C
working groups use it.  It generates a lot of "churn" when a document is in
flux, but... it means nothing public-facing is stale.

On Tue, Apr 12, 2016 at 5:16 PM, Adrian Hope-Bailie <adrian@hopebailie.com>
wrote:

> <wg chair>
> Thanks Shane this helps us to get to a decision on the way forward.
> </wg chair>
>
> <wg member>
>
> It would appear that Ripple is the only member strongly opposed to
> publishing the Payment Method Identifiers spec at this time.
>
> In the interest of getting consensus and moving us forward I withdraw my
> objection but request that the group urgently address the fact that this
> document is:
>
>    1. Loaded with unanswered questions and issues
>    2. Incomplete, as it provides very little concrete direction for the
>    industry on how to define a new payment method and write the appropriate
>    specifications for this.
>    3. Ambiguous, as it proposes 3 options for achieving it's goals
>
> I ask that this document become a priority deliverable for the WG and that
> changes to the editor's drafts be pushed to the the WD regularly so that
> the current draft is not left out in public for much longer.
>
> </wg member>
>
> On 12 April 2016 at 18:08, Shane McCarron <shane@spec-ops.io> wrote:
>
>> Apologies - Ian mentioned that my comments may be unclear.  I am in no
>> way saying Spec-Ops formally objects to anything.
>>
>> On Tue, Apr 12, 2016 at 10:22 AM, Shane McCarron <shane@spec-ops.io>
>> wrote:
>>
>>> Spec-Ops has reviewed the draft specifications.  Many others have
>>> comment on the details in earlier responses.  We in particular strongly
>>> agree with the comments made by Adrian Hope-Bailie about the architecture
>>> and payment method identifier documents.  Our responses to the CFC are
>>> below:
>>>
>>>
>>>>    - Proposal 1: Publish "Payment Request API" as a FPWD
>>>>       -
>>>>       https://cdn.rawgit.com/w3c/browser-payment-api/0d1d5d7ff0f1bb7b37970994f1eb719101aaccbc/fpwd/paymentrequest.html
>>>>
>>>>
>>> +1 on publishing this document - while riddled with issues these should
>>> spark broader community review and comment.
>>>
>>>
>>>>
>>>>    - Proposal 2: Publish "Payment Request API Architecture" as a FPWD
>>>>       -
>>>>       https://cdn.rawgit.com/w3c/browser-payment-api/0d1d5d7ff0f1bb7b37970994f1eb719101aaccbc/fpwd/architecture.html
>>>>
>>>>
>>> -1 on publishing this document.  It is misleading in its current form
>>> and may turn off potential adopters with its too-tight focus on browser
>>> payment and lack of detail on the overall architecture of payments.
>>>
>>>
>>>>
>>>>    - Proposal 3: Publish "Payment Method Identifiers" as a FPWD
>>>>       -
>>>>       https://cdn.rawgit.com/w3c/browser-payment-api/0d1d5d7ff0f1bb7b37970994f1eb719101aaccbc/fpwd/method-identifiers.html
>>>>
>>>>
>>> -1 on publishing this document.  It is too immature to publish at this
>>> point.
>>>
>>>
>>>>
>>>>    - Proposal 4: Publish "Basic Card Payment" as a FPWD
>>>>       -
>>>>       https://cdn.rawgit.com/w3c/browser-payment-api/0d1d5d7ff0f1bb7b37970994f1eb719101aaccbc/fpwd/basic-card-payment.html
>>>>
>>>>
>>> +1 to publish this, as without it the Payment Request API document is
>>> contextless and would be hard for people to follow.  However, we agree with
>>> AHB (and others) that the inclusion of WebIDL adds a level of complexity
>>> that is unnecessary for this and future Payment notes.  The WebIDL should
>>> be stripped out and replaced with something friendlier / easier for
>>> non-browser manufacturers to grok.
>>>
>>> Spec-Ops is also fine with publishing NONE of these documents, fixing
>>> the systemic issues with the architecture so that we have a cohesive story,
>>> and the publishing all of the relevant documents - even if they are
>>> issue-laden.
>>>
>>>
>>> On Tue, Apr 12, 2016 at 9:15 AM, Adrian Hope-Bailie <
>>> adrian@hopebailie.com> wrote:
>>>
>>>> Having re-read my email I realize my wording is more negative than
>>>> intended.
>>>>
>>>> Ripple is okay with publishing the Payment Request API and Basic Card
>>>> Payment specifications:
>>>>
>>>>    1. if they are both published, and;
>>>>    2. with the understanding that there is still substantive work to
>>>>    do on both.
>>>>
>>>> We do not support publishing the Payment Method Identifier and
>>>> Architecture documents as we believe these are not yet ready.
>>>>
>>>> On 12 April 2016 at 09:57, Adrian Hope-Bailie <adrian@hopebailie.com>
>>>> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> After a thorough review of the proposed specifications Ripple's
>>>>> position is as follows:
>>>>> (These are the views of Ripple as a WG member and not my personal
>>>>> views as the chair)
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> *Structure of documents*We believe that the way that the documents
>>>>> are structured is not optimal and would propose the following new structure:
>>>>>
>>>>>    - A stand-alone normative specification which defines the role and
>>>>>    conformance criteria for a *payment mediator*. The bulk of this
>>>>>    specification would be produced from content already in the payment request
>>>>>    API specification and payment apps proposal. This specification should
>>>>>    define the algorithms for:
>>>>>       - registration of a payment app
>>>>>       - updating the stored information about a payment app
>>>>>       - accepting and validating a payment request
>>>>>       - calculating the list of payment apps that can process a
>>>>>       payment based on the intersection of method identifiers in the installed
>>>>>       payment apps and payment request
>>>>>       - returning a payment response
>>>>>
>>>>>       - A stand-alone normative specification which defines the role
>>>>>    and conformance criteria for a *payment app*. The bulk of this
>>>>>    specification would be produced from content already in the payment apps
>>>>>    proposal. This specification should define the algorithms for:
>>>>>       - returning a list of supported payment methods
>>>>>       - processing a payment request
>>>>>       - returning a payment response
>>>>>
>>>>>       - A *payment methods specification* which defines payment
>>>>>    method identifiers, a data model for payment method data, the process for
>>>>>    new payment methods to be defined in new payment method messaging
>>>>>    specifications and the requirements for such a specification. This would be
>>>>>    based on the existing payment method identifiers specification but require
>>>>>    substantive additional content.
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>    - A *messaging and extensibility specification* which describes
>>>>>    how payment request, payment response (and possibly other) messages can be
>>>>>    extended and the algorithms that should be used to convert between
>>>>>    in-browser objects (defined in WebIDL) and JSON encoded messages.
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>    - A *user agent API* specification which details the conformance
>>>>>    criteria for user agents as payment mediators in addition to any extra user
>>>>>    agent functionality such as gathering of user data prior to payment
>>>>>    processing. The bulk of this specification would be produced from content
>>>>>    already in the payment request API specification. This specification will
>>>>>    have a normative dependency on the payment mediator, messaging and
>>>>>    extensibility and payment methods specifications and will define API
>>>>>    endpoints for:
>>>>>       - registration of a payment app
>>>>>       - update of a payment app
>>>>>       - accepting a payment request
>>>>>       - returning a payment request (to a web based payment app)
>>>>>       - accepting a payment response (from a web based payment app)
>>>>>       - returning a payment response
>>>>>
>>>>>       - An *HTTP API* specification which details the HTTP client and
>>>>>    server conformance criteria for HTTP clients/servers as payment apps or
>>>>>    payment mediators. This specification will have a normative dependency on
>>>>>    the payment mediator,  payment methods, messaging and extensibility and
>>>>>    payment apps specifications and will define API endpoints for:
>>>>>       - registration of a payment app
>>>>>       - update of a payment app
>>>>>       - accepting a payment request
>>>>>       - getting a list of supported payment apps for a given payment
>>>>>       request
>>>>>       - getting a payment request
>>>>>       - accepting a payment response
>>>>>       - getting a payment response
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> In terms of the existing documents proposed for publication:
>>>>>
>>>>> 1. Payment Request API (-0.5)
>>>>>
>>>>> We do not support publishing of this specification at this time. We do
>>>>> not have a formal objection to publishing on the understanding that the
>>>>> document may have substantive changes before moving to candidate
>>>>> recommendation as we believe the scope set out by this document is a good
>>>>> reflection of the direction of the group and is therefor a fair yard stick
>>>>> for evaluation of patent commitments.
>>>>>
>>>>> Our issues with this document are as follows:
>>>>>
>>>>>    - The current specification doesn't define clearly how the Payment
>>>>>    Request API fits into the larger architecture. A brief architecture related
>>>>>    paragraph that links to the architecture document would be valuable.
>>>>>    - It is extremely challenging to understand the life-cycle of a
>>>>>    payment request through this API with no explicit description of the
>>>>>    processing that is required at the edges of this component. *Nowhere
>>>>>    in the specification is it explicitly explained that a payment request is
>>>>>    passed to a payment app for processing.*
>>>>>    - The aspects of the payment apps specification that describe a
>>>>>    registration API should be included in this specification.
>>>>>    - The role of payment mediator versus the additional behavior of
>>>>>    the user agent to facilitate checkout are intermingled and unclear.
>>>>>
>>>>> 2. Payment Request API Architecture (-1)
>>>>>
>>>>> We object to publishing this document at this time.
>>>>>
>>>>> Our issues with this document are as follows:
>>>>>
>>>>>    - The current draft of the document is incomplete and includes
>>>>>    only the aspects of the payment request architecture that are relevant to
>>>>>    processing a payment within a user agent. We believe this is misleading in
>>>>>    terms of the scope of the WG's work.
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> 3: Payment Method Identifiers (-1)
>>>>>
>>>>> We object to publishing this document at this time.
>>>>>
>>>>> Our issues with this document are as follows:
>>>>>
>>>>>    - The current draft of the document provides very little
>>>>>    substantive value as it contains three proposals that make up the bulk of
>>>>>    the document.
>>>>>    - There is no document that describes the role of payment method
>>>>>    specifications (like the Basic Card Payment Specification) or how these
>>>>>    should be structured.
>>>>>    - There is no consensus on the appropriate way to match payment
>>>>>    method identifiers from the payment request with those supported by a
>>>>>    payment app.
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> 4. Basic Card Payment (-0.5)
>>>>>
>>>>> We do not support publishing of this specification at this time but
>>>>> believe that if the Payment Request API specification is published then
>>>>> this specification should be published too. As such we do not have a formal
>>>>> objection to publishing on the understanding that the document may have
>>>>> substantive changes before moving to candidate recommendation.
>>>>>
>>>>> Our issues with this document are as follows:
>>>>>
>>>>>    - The document uses WebIDL to describe extensible data that is
>>>>>    never processed by the user agent. This gives the impression that user
>>>>>    agents will need to explicitly support each new payment method which is
>>>>>    absolutely incorrect.
>>>>>    - There is no specification that the document references that
>>>>>    defines the requirements for a payment method specification. As such it is
>>>>>    impossible to evaluate if this document will meet the needs of payment app
>>>>>    implementers and payment processors.
>>>>>
>>>>> For Ripple,
>>>>> Adrian
>>>>>
>>>>> On 11 April 2016 at 20:22, Nick Shearer <nshearer@apple.com> wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>>> We support FPWD publication of all four proposals.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Nick.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> On Apr 5, 2016, at 12:29 PM, Adrian Hope-Bailie <
>>>>>> adrian@hopebailie.com> wrote:
>>>>>>
>>>>>> This is a Call for Consensus (CfC) to publish one or more documents
>>>>>> as First Public Working Drafts (FPWD) of the Web Payments Working Group.
>>>>>>
>>>>>>    - Proposal 1: Publish "Payment Request API" as a FPWD
>>>>>>       -
>>>>>>       https://cdn.rawgit.com/w3c/browser-payment-api/0d1d5d7ff0f1bb7b37970994f1eb719101aaccbc/fpwd/paymentrequest.html
>>>>>>    - Proposal 2: Publish "Payment Request API Architecture" as a
>>>>>>    FPWD
>>>>>>       -
>>>>>>       https://cdn.rawgit.com/w3c/browser-payment-api/0d1d5d7ff0f1bb7b37970994f1eb719101aaccbc/fpwd/architecture.html
>>>>>>    - Proposal 3: Publish "Payment Method Identifiers" as a FPWD
>>>>>>       -
>>>>>>       https://cdn.rawgit.com/w3c/browser-payment-api/0d1d5d7ff0f1bb7b37970994f1eb719101aaccbc/fpwd/method-identifiers.html
>>>>>>    - Proposal 4: Publish "Basic Card Payment" as a FPWD
>>>>>>       -
>>>>>>       https://cdn.rawgit.com/w3c/browser-payment-api/0d1d5d7ff0f1bb7b37970994f1eb719101aaccbc/fpwd/basic-card-payment.html
>>>>>>
>>>>>> For each proposal:
>>>>>>
>>>>>>    - We invite responses on this thread to each of the proposals.
>>>>>>    - Silence will be taken to mean there is no Formal Objection [1],
>>>>>>    but positive responses are encouraged. Publication as a FPWD does NOT
>>>>>>    indicate that a document is complete or represent Working Group consensus.
>>>>>>    - If there are no Formal Objections by 12 April 2016 (1pm EDT),
>>>>>>    the proposal will carry and the Chairs will request that the Director
>>>>>>    approve publication as FPWD(s).
>>>>>>
>>>>>> The W3C Director takes Formal Objections seriously, and therefore
>>>>>> they typically require significant time and effort to address. Therefore,
>>>>>> please limit any Formal Objections to issues related to the scope of these
>>>>>> documents rather than technical content where the Working Group has not yet
>>>>>> made a decision. Please include substantive arguments or rationale for
>>>>>> consideration by the Director.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> If there are Formal Objections, the Chairs plan to contact the
>>>>>> individual(s) who made the Formal Objection to see whether there are
>>>>>> changes that would address the concern and increase consensus to publish.
>>>>>> Depending on the number and nature of the Formal Objections, the Chairs
>>>>>> will either make a decision either to pursue FPWD and report the Formal
>>>>>> Objections to the Director (as required by W3C Process), or to postpone
>>>>>> publication until there is greater consensus to publish.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> If there is a decision not to publish a document, we will adjust our
>>>>>> communications to let people know about the Editor's Drafts and the
>>>>>> decision to delay their publication as FPWDs.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> NOTES:
>>>>>>
>>>>>>    - Publication of a FPWD is a signal to the broader community that
>>>>>>    we are seeking review of the specification(s) in their early stages. To
>>>>>>    frame that discussion, we plan to publish a blog post with the publication:
>>>>>>       - https://www.w3.org/2016/03/15-wpwg-blog.txt
>>>>>>    - Publication of a FPWD triggers an event under the W3C Patent
>>>>>>    Policy.
>>>>>>    - The Working Group discussed this Call for Consensus at its 17
>>>>>>    March 2016 teleconference
>>>>>>       - https://www.w3.org/2016/03/17-wpwg-minutes
>>>>>>
>>>>>> For the Chairs, Adrian Hope-Bailie
>>>>>>
>>>>>> [1] https://www.w3.org/2015/Process-20150901/#Consensus
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> --
>>> Shane McCarron
>>> Projects Manager, Spec-Ops
>>>
>>
>>
>>
>> --
>> Shane McCarron
>> Projects Manager, Spec-Ops
>>
>
>


-- 
Shane McCarron
Projects Manager, Spec-Ops

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