UA: Comments on translation from Fidelity

Here are comments from Bill Duserick from Fidelity on our translation 
draft. He sent this as a word file with change bars so I have saved it 
as PDF to make sure the change bars get preserved.

Lorrie

Begin forwarded message:

> From: "Duserick, William" <William.Duserick@fmr.com>
> Date: Wed Jul 2, 2003  11:50:06  AM America/New_York
> To: "'Lorrie Cranor'" <lorrie@research.att.com>
> Subject: RE: P3P elements in plain language
>
> Lorrie
>
> Attached is a Word document with comments on some of the 
> elements/tokens.
> Feel free to share this with other members of the user agent task 
> force.
> Let me know if you have any questions or comments regarding my 
> comments.
>
> Regards,
>
> Bill
> Bill Duserick
> Fidelity Investments
> Corporate Privacy Office
> (617) 392-1224
> william.duserick@fmr.com
>