- From: Sandro Hawke <sandro@w3.org>
- Date: Wed, 13 May 2009 08:09:15 -0400
- To: Sebastian Rudolph <rudolph@aifb.uni-karlsruhe.de>
- cc: Mike Smith <msmith@clarkparsia.com>, W3C OWL Working Group <public-owl-wg@w3.org>
> Just a thought on your first comment: > "The use of the word "individual" in the first sentence of the > preceding paragraph may present problems for users new to OWL. They > are likely to think individual refers to a single person." > > ...would "object" be more appropriate? Unfortunately, "entity" is > already reserved for syntactic ontology elements and should not be used. I quite agree with Mike that the use of "individual" like this is a problem. I bet anyone not already familiar with OWL jargon would read this sentence to mean OWL is a language for describing social networks! Other words that might be used include "elements", "items", and "resources", but for this sentence, I'd just use "things". This may also be a problem for the abstract, but reading the word "individual" in the abstract as meaning "person" doesn't quite make sense, so it's more clear that it's jargon. -- Sandro
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