- From: Sandro Hawke <sandro@w3.org>
- Date: Thu, 11 Jun 2009 16:07:24 -0400
- To: "Michael Schneider" <schneid@fzi.de>
- cc: public-owl-wg@w3.org
> But I found several general issues, the first being > particularly important: > > 1. Schedule > ----------- > > I don't understand why the "Status of the Document" > tells: > > "Please Comment By 30 July 2009" > > How can we then keep our time line as defined in > > <http://www.w3.org/2007/OWL/wiki/Timeline> > > According to this timeline, we plan want to publish > our spec as PR on 1st of August, i.e. the day after > the comment period ends! I just left the duration constant (7 weeks), as the publication date slipped. I can reduce it a little, but July 15 strikes me as very short. Are the implementors comfortable with being all done and with all comments made by July 15? Is July 30 better? > 2. Color Diff > ------------- > > This document is already marked as the final "CR" > (why not as an "ED", as always?) Those two letters are one of the status indicators. "ED" means "editors-draft", a sort of unofficial status. > but still contains > the "color diff" to the right of the "Previous Version"=20 > in the header of the document. I think this should=20 > be removed in the published version, since I think it=20 > is only for WG-internal checking (we never had this=20 > in any of our previously published WDs, AFAIR). Perhaps I didn't say it clearly in my e-mail. As I tried to explain, I put the diff in there, because I think some users will want to see it, and I don't think it does harm. ( Some other groups' TRs do this as well, eg http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/ ) The only reason I've taken them out in previous publication rounds was because for those rounds they were useless -- the changes were too great. In this round, the changes on most documents are very, very small, and I like how this makes that fact clear. Of course, if others want them gone, I can live with that. > 3. Typo in PDFs > --------------- > > As already reported earlier, all the PDFs have on the > left hand side of the header of each page a text like: > > "OWL 2 Web Ontology LanguageDocument Overview" > > i.e. there is no white space between the generic > "OWL 2 Web Ontology Language" string and the > document title. Should be fixed. Oh. Hmmm. I never noticed that before. I can't think of a good way to fix that, but I'll try to come up with something. (The problem is that that string is just the document's title, and the document's title has a <br/> separator there, which is understandably dropped. I should make that PDF title be a shorter version of the document title (eg "OWL 2 Profiles") but that text doesn't actually occur anywhere in the HTML for me to use.... I guess I could put it somewhere, with CSS making it not display. Ugh.) -- Sandro > Michael > > >-----Original Message----- > >From: public-owl-wg-request@w3.org = > [mailto:public-owl-wg-request@w3.org] > >On Behalf Of Sandro Hawke > >Sent: Thursday, June 11, 2009 7:52 AM > >To: public-owl-wg@w3.org > >Subject: documents staged in place > > > > > >As the final stage before publication, I've put the documents into = > their > >expected publication locations, all linked from: > > > > http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/WD-owl2-overview- > >20090611/#Documentation_Roadmap > > > >I'm in the process of doing the mechanical checks, but there are = > various > >possible failures that it's hard for me to spot, so editors please take > >one more look at your documents as soon as possible. > > > >I've included the color-coded diffs here, which I was leaving out in = > TRs > >in the past because the changes were so huge. Here the changes (since > >LC) are mostly pretty small, so these diffs are quite readable for most > >docs. > > > > -- Sandro > > > > -- > Dipl.-Inform. Michael Schneider > Research Scientist, Dept. Information Process Engineering (IPE) > Tel : +49-721-9654-726 > Fax : +49-721-9654-727 > Email: michael.schneider@fzi.de > WWW : http://www.fzi.de/michael.schneider > =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= > =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= > =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D > FZI Forschungszentrum Informatik an der Universit=E4t Karlsruhe > Haid-und-Neu-Str. 10-14, D-76131 Karlsruhe > Tel.: +49-721-9654-0, Fax: +49-721-9654-959 > Stiftung des b=FCrgerlichen Rechts, Az 14-0563.1, RP Karlsruhe > Vorstand: Prof. Dr.-Ing. R=FCdiger Dillmann, Dipl. Wi.-Ing. Michael = > Flor, > Prof. Dr. Dr. h.c. 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