Re: Call for Consensus: Please review the draft charter

hi! i'm new to this, so i'm just saying what comes to my mind, without
being held back by any expertise on the subject ;)

> 1. Can run locally on a device (including, but not limited to mobile
devices, desktops, and server-class machines)

why include server-class machines? i would say either 'mobile devices and
personal computers', where personal computer is meant to mean
laptop+desktop together. And maybe even split mobile into 'phones' and
'tablets', although i can understand if you think it's too early to talk
about tablets.

> 2. Can be deployed, or otherwise embedded, from a server.

i don't understand the use of 'embedded' here. maybe this is where you can
use the 'installable' word? i think part of what we want to learn is what
the words install, deploy and embed mean to the security expectations of a
user, so probably the word we are looking for to describe point 2 is a word
that does not exist yet, but will exist next year. :)

> 3. Can be transformed into other formats so that they may be run across
multiple platforms.

other than what? i think 'multiple' makes more sense here, and maybe it's
more a question of packaging than of formatting? because the format i
understand to be html5 (as in html+css+js), and the packaging is what you
do to make it run across multiple platforms.


cheers,

Michiel de Jong