- From: Dmitri Silaev <Dmitri.Silaev@Sun.COM>
- Date: Fri, 22 Jan 2010 22:35:54 +0300
- To: Dominique Hazael-Massieux <dom@w3.org>
- Cc: public-mwts@w3.org
Hi Dom, I've reviewed new version. There are only minor comments for it. Overall, document looks excellent. 1. Relationship to the standardization process > "However, it is the tools provided by the standards organization that harness the collective intelligence of actors (by capturing their interactions and communications)." Why "However"? May be "The tools provided by the standards organization harness the collective intelligence of actors (by capturing their interactions and communications)" 2. Extracting Conformance Requirements > "The CSS selector finds all p elements" p should be <code>p</code> in source. 3. Testable Assertions and Test Cases > code>fail Should be <code>fail</code> in source Thanks, Dmitri. On 19.01.2010 16:49, Dominique Hazael-Massieux wrote: > Le lundi 18 janvier 2010 à 15:58 +0100, Dominique Hazael-Massieux a > écrit : > >> • Test assertions methodology >> Still pending Marcos editing pass >> http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-mwts/2010Jan/0024.html >> > Marcos has committed an extensive rewrite of the document: > http://dev.w3.org/2008/dev-ind-testing/extracting-test-assertions-pub.html > http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/2008/dev-ind-testing/extracting-test-assertions-pub.html > > Would be good to make another pass at reviewing the new version, before > moving forward with the publication request. > > Dom > > > >
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