Re: new updated roadmap available

 Stephane, all,

   Yes, this should be the order (as you mentioned Stephane in your previous
mail) --


>
> - what's possible today
> - what are major challenges that might impact the success of a mobile
> delivery of information or applications
> - what are the different technologies existing today to deliver content and
> apps and there respectives strenght/weaknesses and potential R&D direction
> to follow
>
>

I did not see a place holder for "whats possible today" in the current
version and since the technology section seem to cover the status quo
(according to the current version), i felt that the logical sequence should
have the technology section coming before the challenges....

Else, we go with the flow as in the current version with the listing of
challenges first, BUT then the technology section should be more like a
"solution section" that MAPS existing "business and technology challenges"
with the "business and technology solutions" available....

Note that challenges and solutions include both business/market and
technology aspects (as already listed in the current version)....

In addition to this, if some challenges do not have "an existing and ready"
solution, then this should be covered in a separate section or subsection
covering these open issues and our thoughts on how these could be
addressed.

So, in short, I mean the following changes, added in <....>:

*Introduction* <http://www.w3.org/2008/MW4D/wiki/roadmapv2#introduction> --
can leverage existing literature
*Audience* <http://www.w3.org/2008/MW4D/wiki/roadmapv2#audience>
*Scope <http://www.w3.org/2008/MW4D/wiki/roadmapv2#scope>*
*Objectives <http://www.w3.org/2008/MW4D/wiki/roadmapv2#objectives>*
*Challenges <http://www.w3.org/2008/MW4D/wiki/roadmapv2#challenges>  --
covers business/market and tech. challenges*
*<Solutions> -- covers existing business/market and tech. solns*
*<Open Issues> -- if any and possible directions*
*Conclusion <http://www.w3.org/2008/MW4D/wiki/roadmapv2#conclusion> --
summarize the roadmap*
*References <http://www.w3.org/2008/MW4D/wiki/roadmapv2#references>*
*Acknowledgements <http://www.w3.org/2008/MW4D/wiki/roadmapv2#ack>*

Regards
Renjish