CVS WWW/International/multilingualweb/lt/drafts/its20

Update of /w3ccvs/WWW/International/multilingualweb/lt/drafts/its20
In directory gil:/tmp/cvs-serv15471

Modified Files:
	its20.odd 
Log Message:
reformulated a non-normative must in the first sentence of 2.5 Specific HTML support.
Fixed grammar in 2.5.1 (before examples) and added explanation of preference.

--- /w3ccvs/WWW/International/multilingualweb/lt/drafts/its20/its20.odd	2013/06/17 09:10:10	1.452
+++ /w3ccvs/WWW/International/multilingualweb/lt/drafts/its20/its20.odd	2013/06/17 09:12:30	1.453
@@ -605,7 +605,7 @@
 
         <div xml:id="specific-HTML-support"><head>Specific HTML support</head>
           
-          <p>For applying ITS 2.0 data categories to HTML, five aspects must be considered:</p>
+          <p>For applying ITS 2.0 data categories to HTML, five aspects are of importance:</p>
           <list type="ordered">
             <item>global approach</item>
             <item>local approach</item>
@@ -620,7 +620,9 @@
               </p>
             <list><item>a link type for referring to external files with global rules from a <code>link</code> element</item>
               <item>an approach to have inline global rules in the HTML <code>script</code> element.</item></list>
-              <p>It is preferred to use external global rules linked via the <code>link</code> element than to have inline global rules in the HTML document.</p>
+              <p>It is preferable to use external global rules linked via the <code>link</code> element rather than to have inline global rules in the HTML document. 
+                The advantage is in being able to reuse the same rules file for many documents and also inline rules require secondary parsing
+                of the <code>script</code> element.</p>
             <exemplum xml:id="EX-translate-html5-global-1">
               <head>Using ITS global rules in HTML</head>
               <p>The <code>link</code> element points to the rules file

Received on Monday, 17 June 2013 09:12:31 UTC