CVS WWW/International/multilingualweb/lt/drafts/its20

Update of /w3ccvs/WWW/International/multilingualweb/lt/drafts/its20
In directory gil:/tmp/cvs-serv10611

Modified Files:
	its20.odd 
Log Message:
Edits from Arle for section 4

--- /w3ccvs/WWW/International/multilingualweb/lt/drafts/its20/its20.odd	2013/06/01 11:29:00	1.433
+++ /w3ccvs/WWW/International/multilingualweb/lt/drafts/its20/its20.odd	2013/06/01 11:39:34	1.434
@@ -986,7 +986,7 @@
             the markup in XML documents. Such markup is subject to the conformance clauses in <ptr
               target="#conformance-product-processing-expectations" type="specref"/>.</p>
           <p><emph>Definitions related to this conformance type:</emph> ITS markup declarations are
-            defined in various subsections in
+            defined in various subsections
             <!-- <ptr
 							target="#its-processing" type="specref"/> and <ptr
 							target="#datacategory-description" type="specref"/> (e.g. <ptr
@@ -1006,12 +1006,11 @@
                 <item>one of the local ITS attributes</item>
                 <item><gi>span</gi> element</item>
               </list></item>
-            <item><p xml:id="its-conformance-1-2"><emph>1-2:</emph> If the <gi>rules</gi> element is
-                used, it <ref target="#rfc-keywords">MUST</ref> be part of the content model of at
-                least one element declared in the schema. It <ref target="#rfc-keywords"
-                  >SHOULD</ref> be in a content model for meta information, if this is available in
-                that schema (e.g. the <code>head</code> element in <ptr target="#xhtml10"
-                  type="bibref"/>).</p></item>
+            <item><p xml:id="its-conformance-1-2"><emph>1-2:</emph> If the <gi>rules</gi> element is used, it <ref
+                  target="#rfc-keywords">MUST</ref> be part of the content model of at least one
+                element declared in the schema. It <ref target="#rfc-keywords">SHOULD</ref> be in a
+                content model for meta information, if this is available in that schema (e.g., the
+                  <code>head</code> element in <ptr target="#xhtml10" type="bibref"/>).</p></item>
             <!-- <item diff="del"><emph>1-2: </emph> The
 				 <gi>schemaRule</gi> element <ref
 				 target="#rfc2119">MAY</ref> be used as part of a <ref
@@ -1046,7 +1045,7 @@
               target="#def-selection">selection mechanism</ref>, <ref
               target="#datacategories-defaults-etc">defaults / inheritance / overriding
               characteristics</ref>, and <ref target="#selection-precedence">precedence</ref>. The
-            markup <ref target="#rfc-keywords">MAY</ref> be valid against a schema which conforms to
+            markup <ref target="#rfc-keywords">MAY</ref> be valid against a schema that conforms to
             the clauses in <ptr target="#conformance-product-schema" type="specref"/>.</p>
           <p><emph>Definitions related to this conformance type:</emph> The processing expectations
             for ITS markup make use of selection mechanisms defined in <ptr target="#its-processing"
@@ -1063,9 +1062,9 @@
             process.</p>
           <note>
             <p> Application-specific processing (that is processing that goes beyond the computation
-              of ITS information for a node) such as automated filtering of translatable content
-              based on the <ref target="#trans-datacat">Translate</ref> data category is not covered
-              by the conformance clauses below.</p>
+              of ITS information for a node), such as automated filtering of translatable content
+              based on the <ref target="#trans-datacat">Translate</ref> data category, is not
+              covered by the conformance clauses below.</p>
           </note>
           <p>
             <emph>Conformance clauses:</emph>
@@ -1087,10 +1086,9 @@
                       type="specref"/>, for the type of selections it processes.</p></item>
               </list></item>
 
-            <item><p xml:id="its-conformance-2-2"><emph>2-2:</emph> If an application claims to
-                process ITS markup for the global selection mechanism, it <ref
-                  target="#rfc-keywords">MUST</ref> process an XLink <att>href</att> attribute found
-                on a <gi>rules</gi> elements.</p></item>
+            <item><p xml:id="its-conformance-2-2"><emph>2-2:</emph> If an application claims to process ITS markup for
+                the global selection mechanism, it <ref target="#rfc-keywords">MUST</ref> process an
+                XLink <att>href</att> attribute found on a <gi>rules</gi> element.</p></item>
             <item><p xml:id="its-conformance-2-3"><emph>2-3:</emph> If an application claims to
                 process ITS markup implementing the conformance clauses 2-1, 2-2 and 2-3, it <ref
                   target="#rfc-keywords">MUST</ref> process that markup with XML
@@ -1122,16 +1120,15 @@
               defaults and precedence of selections (clauses 2-1-2 and 2-1-3); for each data
               category there are tests with linked rules (2-2); and all types of tests are given for
               XML (clause 2-3). In addition, there are test cases for conversion to NIF (clause
-              2-4). Implementors are encouraged to organize their documentation in a similar way, so
-              that users of ITS 2.0 easily can understand the processing capabilities
-            available.</p></note>
+              2-4). Implementers are encouraged to organize their documentation in a similar way, so
+              that users of ITS 2.0 easily can understand the processing capabilities available.</p></note>
         </div>
         <div xml:id="conformance-product-html-processing-expectations">
           <head>Conformance Type 3: Processing Expectations for ITS Markup in HTML</head>
 
           <p><emph>Description:</emph> Processors need to compute the ITS information that pertains
-            to a node in a HTML document. The ITS processing expectations define how the computation
-            has to be carried out. Correct computation involves support for <ref
+            to a node in an HTML document. The ITS processing expectations define how the
+            computation has to be carried out. Correct computation involves support for <ref
               target="#def-selection">selection mechanism</ref>, <ref
               target="#datacategories-defaults-etc">defaults / inheritance / overriding
               characteristics</ref>, and <ref target="#html5-selection-precedence"
@@ -1147,9 +1144,8 @@
               target="#html5-inline-global-rules">inline global</ref>).</p>
           <p><emph>Who uses this conformance type:</emph> Applications that need to process the
             nodes captured by a data category for internationalization or localization. Examples of
-            this type of application are: ITS markup-aware editors, or translation tools that make
-            use of ITS markup to filter translatable text as an input to the localization
-            process.</p>
+            this type of application are ITS markup-aware editors or translation tools that make use
+            of ITS markup to filter translatable text as an input to the localization process.</p>
           <note>
             <p> Application-specific processing (that is processing that goes beyond the computation
               of ITS information for a node) such as automated filtering of translatable content
@@ -1176,11 +1172,10 @@
                       type="specref"/>, for the type of selections it processes.</p></item>
               </list></item>
 
-            <item><p xml:id="its-conformance-3-2"><emph>3-2:</emph> If an application claims to
-                process ITS markup for the global selection mechanism, it <ref
-                  target="#rfc-keywords">MUST</ref> process a <att>href</att> attribute found on a
-                  <code>link</code> elements which has a <code>rel</code> attribute with the value
-                  <code>its-rules</code>.</p></item>
+            <item><p xml:id="its-conformance-3-2"><emph>3-2:</emph> If an application claims to process ITS markup for
+                the global selection mechanism, it <ref target="#rfc-keywords">MUST</ref> process a
+                  <att>href</att> attribute found on a <code>link</code> element that has a
+                  <code>rel</code> attribute with the value <code>its-rules</code>.</p></item>
             <item><p xml:id="its-conformance-3-3"><emph>3-3:</emph> If an application claims to
                 process ITS markup implementing the conformance clauses 3-1 and 3-2, it <ref
                   target="#rfc-keywords">MUST</ref> process that markup within HTML
@@ -1188,8 +1183,8 @@
           </list>
           <p xml:id="its-html-processing-conformance-claims">Statements related to this conformance
             type <ref target="#rfc-keywords">MUST</ref> list all <ref target="#def-datacat">data
-              categories</ref> they implement, and for each <ref target="#def-datacat">data
-              category</ref> which type of selection they support.</p>
+              categories</ref> they implement and, for each <ref target="#def-datacat">data
+              category</ref>, which type of selection they support.</p>
         </div>
         <div xml:id="conformance-class-html5-its">
           <head>Conformance Class for HTML5+ITS documents</head>
@@ -1198,7 +1193,7 @@
             exception:</p>
           <list>
             <item><ref target="http://dev.w3.org/html5/spec/single-page.html#global-attributes"
-                >Global attributes</ref> which can be used on all HTML elements are extended by
+                >Global attributes</ref> that can be used on all HTML elements are extended by
               attributes for local data categories as defined in <ptr
                 target="#html5-local-attributes" type="specref"/>.</item>
           </list>

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