- From: CVS User jkosek <cvsmail@w3.org>
- Date: Sat, 01 Jun 2013 11:29:00 +0000
- To: public-multilingualweb-lt-commits@w3.org
Update of /w3ccvs/WWW/International/multilingualweb/lt/drafts/its20
In directory gil:/tmp/cvs-serv10067
Modified Files:
its20.odd
Log Message:
Edits from Arle for section 3
--- /w3ccvs/WWW/International/multilingualweb/lt/drafts/its20/its20.odd 2013/06/01 06:42:50 1.432
+++ /w3ccvs/WWW/International/multilingualweb/lt/drafts/its20/its20.odd 2013/06/01 11:29:00 1.433
@@ -851,8 +851,8 @@
implementations of ITS for the above URI is <val>its</val>. It is recommended that XML
implementations of this specification use this prefix, unless there is existing
dedicated markup in use for a given data category. In HTML there is no namespace prefix:
- <val>its-</val> is used to indicate ITS 2.0 attributes in HTML documents. See <ptr
- target="#html5-local-attributes" type="specref"/> for details.</p>
+ <val>its-</val> is used instead to indicate ITS 2.0 attributes in HTML documents. See
+ <ptr target="#html5-local-attributes" type="specref"/> for details.</p>
<p>In addition, the following namespaces are used in this document:</p>
<list type="unordered">
<item><code>http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema</code> for the XML Schema namespace, here
@@ -868,17 +868,17 @@
<p><termStruct term="data category" xml:id="t002">ITS defines <term>data category</term>
as an abstract concept for a particular type of information for internationalization
and localization of XML schemas and documents.</termStruct> The concept of a data
- category is independent of its implementation in an XML and HTML environment (e.g. using
- an element or attribute).</p>
+ category is independent of its implementation in an XML and HTML environment (e.g.,
+ using an element or attribute).</p>
<p>For each data category, ITS distinguishes between the following:</p>
<list type="unordered">
<item>the prose description, see <ptr target="#datacategory-description" type="specref"
/>
</item>
- <item>schema language independent formalization, see the "implementation" subsections in
+ <item>schema language-independent formalization, see the "implementation" subsections in
<ptr target="#datacategory-description" type="specref"/>
</item>
- <item>schema language specific implementations, see <ptr target="#its-schemas"
+ <item>schema language-specific implementations, see <ptr target="#its-schemas"
type="specref"/>
</item>
</list>
@@ -886,14 +886,14 @@
<head>A data category and its implementation</head>
<p>The <ref target="#trans-datacat">Translate</ref> data category conveys information as
to whether a piece of content should be translated or not.</p>
- <p>The simplest formalization of this prose description on a schema language independent
+ <p>The simplest formalization of this prose description on a schema language-independent
level is a <att type="class">translate</att> attribute with two possible values:
- <val>yes</val> and <val>no</val>. An implementation on a schema language specific
+ <val>yes</val> and <val>no</val>. An implementation on a schema language-specific
level would be the declaration of the <att type="class">translate</att> attribute in,
- for example, an XML Schema document or an RELAX NG document. A different
- implementation would be a <gi>translateRule</gi> element that allows for specifying
- <ref target="#selection-global">global rules</ref> about the <ref
- target="#trans-datacat">Translate</ref> data category.</p>
+ for example, an XML Schema document or a RELAX NG document. A different implementation
+ would be a <gi>translateRule</gi> element that allows for specifying <ref
+ target="#selection-global">global rules</ref> about the <ref target="#trans-datacat"
+ >Translate</ref> data category.</p>
</exemplum>
</div>
<div xml:id="def-selection">
@@ -905,8 +905,8 @@
globally, see <ptr target="#selection-global" type="specref"/>, and locally, see <ptr
target="#selection-local" type="specref"/>. As for global selection, ITS information
can be <ref target="#def-adding-pointing">added</ref> to the selected nodes, or it can
- <ref target="#def-adding-pointing">point to existing information</ref> which is
- related to selected nodes. </p>
+ <ref target="#def-adding-pointing">point to existing information</ref> that is related
+ to selected nodes. </p>
<note>
<p xml:id="note-object-selection">The selection of the ITS data categories applies to
textual values contained within element or attribute nodes. In some cases these nodes
@@ -955,9 +955,8 @@
<div xml:id="def-css-selector">
<head>The Term CSS Selectors</head>
<p>This specification uses the term <code>CSS Selectors</code> in the sense of
- <code>Selectors</code> as specifies in <ptr target="#css3-selectors" type="bibref"/>
- to prevent confusion with the generic use of the word "selector". <ptr
- target="#css3-selectors" type="bibref"/>.</p>
+ <code>Selectors</code> as specified in <ptr target="#css3-selectors" type="bibref"/>
+ to prevent confusion with the generic use of the word "selector".</p>
</div>
</div>
<div xml:id="conformance">
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