- From: Raphaël Troncy <Raphael.Troncy@cwi.nl>
- Date: Wed, 18 Nov 2009 10:35:14 +0100
- To: Media Fragment <public-media-fragment@w3.org>
Dear all, I have finally completed my ACTION-117: "Review Silvia's summary of her blogpost, i.e. the Section 3 of the spec". Excellent writing Silvia, thanks! I have done some minor corrections that I guess you would not mind. I have also added some ed-notes that we could further discuss today. I think the text in this section is clear and provide a very good motivation and introduction to the spec that will follow. My only remark, also valid for the whole document, is in the formatting. We need to work on the css and xmlspec to make the formatting prettier and the block of text more digestible. Cheers. Raphaël -- Raphaël Troncy EURECOM, Multimedia Communications Department 2229, route des Crêtes, 06560 Sophia Antipolis, France. e-mail: raphael.troncy@eurecom.fr & raphael.troncy@gmail.com Tel: +33 (0)4 - 9300 8242 Fax: +33 (0)4 - 9000 8200 Web: http://www.eurecom.fr/~troncy/
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