For consideration: comments and editing upon review of section 5.4 Constraints on Actions

Below for consideration:  comments and editing on 5.4 Constraints on Actions:

Constraints on Actions

display types

Definition:  Classifies the display application as being either for individual use or public display [Question: Is this enough definition?  And I assume this is unrelated to whether an action falls under a display or non-display use case.  Perhaps we should add an editorial note to give an example of "individual use" versus "public display".]

Constraint Values

Market Depth

Note:  Market depth can be qualified to specify the exact depth of market offered by using the position from and position to properties. (See Example 11).  [For ease of reading, add quote marks around "position from" and "position to", or put them in italics.]

Display Type

Scope Note:  Used to constrain a Display action to allow either individual or public presentation.  [Same comment as in "display types" above.  Wondering if we may need to give readers more clarity on the difference between individual and public presentation.]

One more on that page:

Time
Time Instants

There are some moments in time which are of particulat interest and demand definition. The following are especially useful in calculating the timeliness of data.  [Adjust spelling to particular]


Thank you,
Laura



From: Mark Bird <mark.bird@databp.com>
Sent: Wednesday, May 5, 2021 12:13 PM
To: public-md-odrl-profile@w3.org
Subject: Request for ODRL Specification Reviewers

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Hi everyone,



I hope you're week has been pleasant and productive. On last week's ODRL community group call we talked about reviewing the Market Data Profile for ODRL<https://w3c.github.io/market-data-odrl-profile/md-odrl-profile.html> document that is close to being finalized. I'd like to ask for at least two people to sign up to review one of three sections of the document. Of course the more the merrier!



The three sections are:



  *   Parties and Constraints on Parties

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     *   2.4 Supply Chain Metamodel - Entities<https://nam02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fw3c.github.io%2Fmarket-data-odrl-profile%2Fmd-odrl-profile.html%23Entities&data=04%7C01%7Cmark.bird%40databp..com%7Cb616743110fa430520c908d90fe1c062%7Cb96ad7214b2f4c3d890decb8f034c790%7C1%7C0%7C637558284547052136%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=DI9BQ9GyQLzhH7Uf71pr3BybeNZMyZowEIRFGGbzTlM%3D&reserved=0>
     *   5.3 Constraints on Rules<https://nam02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fw3c.github.io%2Fmarket-data-odrl-profile%2Fmd-odrl-profile.html%23ConstraintsOnRules&data=04%7C01%7Cmark.bird%40databp.com%7Cb616743110fa430520c908d90fe1c062%7Cb96ad7214b2f4c3d890decb8f034c790%7C1%7C0%7C637558284547052136%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=aRZiv8GBqTQVP5EO14%2BevJez6NdF4PjRFgLnlYLPpuc%3D&reserved=0>



  *   Resources and Constraints on Resources

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  *   Activities and Actions and their Constraints

     *   2.3 Supply Chain Metamodel - Activities<https://nam02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fw3c.github.io%2Fmarket-data-odrl-profile%2Fmd-odrl-profile.html%23Activities&data=04%7C01%7Cmark.bird%40databp.com%7Cb616743110fa430520c908d90fe1c062%7Cb96ad7214b2f4c3d890decb8f034c790%7C1%7C0%7C637558284547072047%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=3%2B8JcWLNqFri7Ed2iYWJkhPJ4etRaYeynDbtYYs3Yuc%3D&reserved=0>
     *   3 Permissions<https://nam02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fw3c.github.io%2Fmarket-data-odrl-profile%2Fmd-odrl-profile..html%23Permissions&data=04%7C01%7Cmark.bird%40databp.com%7Cb616743110fa430520c908d90fe1c062%7Cb96ad7214b2f4c3d890decb8f034c790%7C1%7C0%7C637558284547072047%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=a06P34i0xM0LHKmnnoDTYlg0OVmpjWWXkI8d%2F8do38o%3D&reserved=0>
     *   4 Duties<https://nam02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fw3c.github.io%2Fmarket-data-odrl-profile%2Fmd-odrl-profile.html%23Duties&data=04%7C01%7Cmark.bird%40databp.com%7Cb616743110fa430520c908d90fe1c062%7Cb96ad7214b2f4c3d890decb8f034c790%7C1%7C0%7C637558284547081997%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=%2F1WOne9qVsVZR1uIB5twkyk7UYYG%2BJv9%2FqMtbMljR6k%3D&reserved=0>
     *   5.4 Constraints on Actions<https://nam02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fw3c.github.io%2Fmarket-data-odrl-profile%2Fmd-odrl-profile.html%23ConstraintsOnActions&data=04%7C01%7Cmark.bird%40databp.com%7Cb616743110fa430520c908d90fe1c062%7Cb96ad7214b2f4c3d890decb8f034c790%7C1%7C0%7C637558284547081997%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=6ZaH1UgJ%2FlGuTKQU%2B4DXSLBrs3VvCsBJcljBgfmYk6o%3D&reserved=0>



This review task will be relatively light. The goal isn't to identify anything missing or wrong in the specification, but just to highlight areas that might be unclear. You'll be looking for things like definitions that can be clarified or examples that can be tightened up. Taking a stab at updating the text would be great, but even simply calling out spots that need attention will be helpful.



You can email your notes to the group, and we can spend time going over them on next week's call.



If you'd like to sign up for one of the three sections above please let me know on this thread, thanks!


Best,
Mark


Mark Bird | DataBP
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New York, NY 10005
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