Call for comments on publishing MBUI intro and glossary

This is a call for comments on publishing the Model-Based UI 
introduction and the associated glossary as Working Group Notes:

    http://www.w3.org/2011/mbui/drafts/mbui-intro/
    http://www.w3.org/2011/mbui/drafts/mbui-glossary/

The glossary is from Jaroslav's email of 22 November 2013.

The Introduction is from the google doc. There are some missing images 
for Use Case 1: Car Rental System, and I am looking for UCL to supply 
them as soon as practical.

We could do with better images in some cases, e.g.

Figure UC2.4 where a large image is needed to be legible. (ISTI-CNR)

Figure UC4.3 where a larger image would be less blurred. The contrast 
between the text and the box background should also be increased. (Paolo 
Bottoni)

Figure UC8.1 and 8.2 have bad fringing on the screen shots, but I 
realize that this may be hard to fix! (University of Grenoble)

I will run the link checker tomorrow and see what it throws up.

-- 
Dave Raggett <dsr@w3.org> http://www.w3.org/People/Raggett

Received on Thursday, 28 November 2013 19:35:59 UTC