Re: Second draft - Research Section

Looks good, except for the extra . in the first sentence.


Thanks

Charles

EOM



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From: Jeff Kline <jeffrey.l.kline@gmail.com>
Sent: Wednesday, June 25, 2025 7:40 AM
To: Sheri Byrne-Haber <sheri@sheribyrne.com>; public-maturity@w3.org <public-maturity@w3.org>
Subject: Re: Second draft - Research Section


Sheri,



Looks good! Please see my proposed edits.



Regards,





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From: Sheri Byrne-Haber <sheri@sheribyrne.com>
Date: Wednesday, June 25, 2025 at 7:24 AM
To: public-maturity@w3.org <public-maturity@w3.org>
Subject: Second draft - Research Section

Attached as a MS Word document

Sheri