- From: Laura Carlson <laura.lee.carlson@gmail.com>
- Date: Wed, 2 Dec 2015 08:37:23 -0600
- To: "Rochford, John" <john.rochford@umassmed.edu>
- Cc: Jim Allan <jimallan@tsbvi.edu>, public-low-vision-a11y-tf <public-low-vision-a11y-tf@w3.org>
Hi John, Thank you! I updated them. Kindest Regards, Laura On 12/2/15, Rochford, John <john.rochford@umassmed.edu> wrote: > Hi Laura, > > > > I copyedited your text. The new versions are below. The only one I did not > change was "2.7 Printing". > > > > 2.1 Luminance and Color > > Because people with low vision are, by nature, an extremely-diverse group > with a wide range of needs, user control of luminance and color is required. > Whenever adjacent colors convey different meanings, such meanings must be > distinguishable. > > > > 2.2 Tracking > > To read and to follow text, users require content to rewrap and reflow; and > text areas must adapt to accommodate. User control of line length, text > alignment, and hyphenation, is necessary for tracking. > > > > 2.3 Perceiving (Letter Characteristics) > > User control of text size, font face, text style, and capitalization, is > required for legibility. > > > > 2.4 Spacing for Reading > > User control of letter, word, and element spacing; as well as leading and > margins; is required for reading. > > > > 2.5 Distinguishing > > User customization and control of text elements, text proportions, borders, > and indentation, is required to differentiate parts of content. > > > > 2.6 Point of Regard and Proximity > > The point of regard must be maintained, and the proximity of related > information must be perceivable. > > John > > John Rochford<http://profiles.umassmed.edu/profiles/display/132901> > UMass Medical School/E.K. Shriver Center > Director, INDEX Program > Instructor, Family Medicine & Community Health > www.DisabilityInfo.org > Twitter: @ClearHelper<https://twitter.com/clearhelper> > [Facebook > Button]<http://www.facebook.com/pages/New-England-INDEXShriver-CenterUMass-Medical-School/227064920160>[Twitter > Button]<https://twitter.com/NEINDEX> [WordPress Logo] > <http://www.disabilityinfo.org/blog/> > > > > -----Original Message----- > From: Laura Carlson [mailto:laura.lee.carlson@gmail.com] > Sent: Monday, November 23, 2015 12:08 PM > To: Jim Allan <jimallan@tsbvi.edu>; public-low-vision-a11y-tf > <public-low-vision-a11y-tf@w3.org> > Subject: Sectional overviews for the requirements document > > > > Hi Jim and everyone, > > > > On 11/20/15, Jim Allan <jimallan@tsbvi.edu<mailto:jimallan@tsbvi.edu>> > wrote: > > > >> 3. Sectional overviews (7 of them) - need 1-2 sentences for each section. > >> The sectional overviews may be combined in larger overveiw later (or > >> not), but it is important to capture terse statements for each section. > > https://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-low-vision-a11y-tf/2015Nov/0024.html > > > > I started on the 7 brief section introductions. Drafts are in GitHub: > > https://github.com/w3c/low-vision-a11y-tf/issues/2 > > > > All comments and ideas for improvement are most welcome and appreciated. > > > > Happy Thanksgiving! > > > > Kindest Regards, > > Laura > > -- > > Laura L. Carlson > > > -- Laura L. Carlson
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