- From: David Booth <david@dbooth.org>
- Date: Tue, 30 Jul 2013 13:42:55 -0400
- To: Markus Lanthaler <markus.lanthaler@gmx.net>
- CC: 'Linked JSON' <public-linked-json@w3.org>
On 07/30/2013 12:30 PM, Markus Lanthaler wrote: > On Monday, July 29, 2013 12:16 AM, David Booth wrote: >> Attached are the corresponding changes that I see that are needed >> in the syntax document: http://json-ld.org/spec/latest/json-ld/ >> >> Again, three documents are attached: >> >> - json-ld-index.html.old: A snapshot of the Syntax document as it >> was before I made the attached edits, to provide a basis for >> diffs. >> >> - json-ld-index2.html: The Syntax document containing my suggested >> changes. >> >> - json-ld-index2-diffs.txt: Diffs between the above files. > > Just as with your changes for the API spec, I've created a pull > request for this and commented the changes there. See: > > https://github.com/json-ld/json-ld.org/pull/288/files > > >> Other editorial issues that I noticed but I did not fix in the >> attached version: >> >> 1. The Abstract begins: "JSON is a useful data serialization and >> messaging format". Delete "useful" or perhaps delete the whole >> sentence. (Other data serialization and messaging formats are >> *not* useful?) > > The abstract is a teaser trying to convince people to read the rest. > As such, I think it is fine to include such a statement. Just because > something is useful doesn't automatically mean other things aren't. It's a stylistic question, so it isn't a big deal either way, but since it is the very first sentence in the spec that someone is likely to read, it may be worth asking a few others what they think. > > >> 2. The Features at Risk section needs to be updated regarding >> blank nodes as predicates. > > Are you still talking about the syntax spec? Yes. > Why does it need to be > changed? Because it doesn't list those three options? That's just an > issue marker and will be dropped in the final document. Okay. I wasn't sure how it should be updated, so I didn't touch it. > > > David, could you please join the JSON-LD Community Group > (http://www.w3.org/community/json-ld/) so that we can use your > contributions. I will check if we need anything else from you before > I can merge those changes. Done. Thanks! David
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