- From: David Wood <david@3roundstones.com>
- Date: Fri, 13 Sep 2013 16:12:04 -0400
- To: Steve Battle <steven.a.battle@gmail.com>
- Cc: "public-ldp-wg@w3.org Working Group" <public-ldp-wg@w3.org>
- Message-Id: <018567CE-508D-4F3E-B395-CD07F78520C0@3roundstones.com>
Hi Steve, This message contains comments regarding Section 5 of the UC&R draft [1]. I provided earlier verbal feedback to the UC&R draft at the LDP WG FTF2 [2] in Boston. - The listed functional and non-functional requirements look sane to me and reflect, as far as I can tell, both the use cases and the current state of the specification. - It would be handy to link each requirement to the section(s) of the specification that relate. - F3.2 and UC3 [3] require client to retrieve the description of a hash URI. The current specification seems to support this requirement without making any specific reference to hash URIs embedded in LDPRs. Is this a problem or does it suggest that this requirement is currently orthogonal to the spec? I don't object to leaving it in, but thought I should mention it. - UC4 [4] uses the term :mens_sprint in Examples 7 and 8 without the presence of a base URI, thus making the examples invalid. There may be other problems of this type elsewhere in the document. - F4.2 and UC4 use the term "selective update", which I parse as synonymous with PATCH. Is that the intention? It would appear so based on the sentence, "The granularity of the resource would allow a user to replace the information about the award without disturbing the information about the event." The UC&R document may need to be modified based on the result of the PATCH discussion. I claim that this satisfies ACTION-41 [5] and have marked that action as "pending review". Regards, Dave -- http://about.me/david_wood [1] https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/ldpwg/raw-file/default/ldp-ucr.html#requirements [2] http://www.w3.org/2012/ldp/wiki/F2F2 [3] https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/ldpwg/raw-file/default/ldp-ucr.html#dfn-uc3 [4] https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/ldpwg/raw-file/default/ldp-ucr.html#dfn-uc4 [5] https://www.w3.org/2012/ldp/track/actions/41
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