- From: Norm Tovey-Walsh <norm@saxonica.com>
- Date: Wed, 19 Feb 2025 16:32:48 +0000
- To: David Birnbaum <djbpitt@gmail.com>
- Cc: ixml <public-ixml@w3.org>
David Birnbaum <djbpitt@gmail.com> writes:
> that where examples say "produce the XML" followed by angle-bracketed code blocks, we mean not "produce the following angle-bracketed XML code blocks", but something like "produce XML that can be serialized as …".
Yes, absolutely. I made a couple of attempts at that and didn’t like the results. In the end, I settled on fewer, simpler words for the first draft. But it’s not really satisfactory.
I’ll come back with fresh eyes tomorrow or later in the week and see if I can flesh that out a bit.
I’m pleased that you see the changes as an improvement!
Be seeing you,
norm
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Norm Tovey-Walsh
Saxonica
Received on Wednesday, 19 February 2025 16:32:56 UTC