Hi Alan, This letter looks good. The only observation I have is in the last sentence of the letter of thanks - "Any success will be as much yours if we all meet our goals of serving the unknown Indian user." could be re-framed as "Any success will be as much yours if we all meet our goals of serving the next billion Indian language users." :-) Best, Alolita On Fri, Nov 24, 2017 at 4:01 AM, J. Alan Bird <abird@w3.org> wrote: > Richard, > > Great catches - thanks! > > Mahesh, > > I'm wondering when and how we should deliver this to Swaran. I was > hoping to have it finalized this past Monday so both Jeff and I could sign > it while I was in the office but we've missed that opportunity. I think > what I should do is send it to Jeff for signature and have him scan it to > me then I'll print and sign it at home on Sunday night. I would then send > most of the letter as an e-mail to Swaran and attached the scanned, signed > version. Once I get back to MIT on the 10th we could then send the "real > signed" version to her via FedEx or DHL. Does this work? > > Cheers, > > Alan > > > > On 11/24/2017 06:46, r12a wrote: > >> On 18/11/2017 18:21, J. Alan Bird wrote: >> >>> Attached is the version of the letter I want to put in front of >>> Jeff for signature on Monday. Let me know if you have any other tuning >>> suggestions. >>> >> >> editorial nit suggestions: >> >> >> "to inform you that we have a new program that we are launching in India" >> -> >> to inform you that we are launching a new program in India >> >> "you lead in the Indic Language Task Force" -> >> you lead in the Indic Layout Task Force >> >> "segment of Web Users" -> >> segment of Web users >> >> "Mr. Dutta's will work closely..." -> >> Mr. Dutta will work closely... >> >> >> "W3C Internationalisation Techincal Lead" -> >> W3C Internationalisation Technical Lead >> >> hth >> ri >> >> >> >> > -- > J. Alan Bird > W3C Global Business Development Leader > office +1 617 253 7823 mobile +1 978 335 0537 > abird@w3.org twitter @jalanbird > >
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