- From: Martin Duerst <duerst@w3.org>
- Date: Thu, 19 Dec 2002 00:43:52 +0900
- To: Tex Texin <tex@XenCraft.com>, Web Services <public-i18n-ws@w3.org>
Hello Tex, Many thanks for your comments. I fixed those that hadn't already been fixed by Kentaro (plus some more). Regards, Martin. At 08:25 02/12/18 -0500, Tex Texin wrote: >Here are comments, mostly typos on the version of the doc available last >night. > >section 2.1.2.2 description >second paragraph, second sentence- change "The senders" to singular "The >sender". >next para: change "middlewares" to "middleware". the plural and singular >are the same. > >sec. 2.2.1.2 desc. >search for "HTTP biding, how" replace with "HTTP binding, how can" (fix >spelling of binding and add "can"). > >sec 2.3.1.2 desc. >sentence beginning with "Date varied by time-zone" should be "Date >varies by time-zone," >(comma added and varied->varies) > >next sentence change "distinct" to "distinguish" > >sec 2.3.2.2 desc. >in the examples change getAvailableFrightResponse to >getAvailableFlightResponse >(several places) > >sec 2.3.3.1 scenario def. >first use of currency should be made plural- currencies. >second use is misspelled. cunrrecy -> currency > >(I am not sure I agree with the ed. note that this is a legacy issue. >mismatched currency is bound to be a problem between systems. >But no change required for this version) > >The paragraph after the first example beginning "The most of regional >services" should be changed to: >"Most regional services use the default region's currency,..." >or >"Most regional services use a default currency,..." > > >next to last para: >change "effect" to "affect". > >sec. 2.3.4.2 desc. >reference to appendix C should be prefixed with "see appendix" so it >reads: >(H means Heisei era. See appendix C Heisei) > >first para after the example: >add "with" after handshake: >"... a receiver can handshake with each..." > >sec 2.5.2.2 desc. >global search and replace "custermiz" with "customiz" >(at least 3 places) > >sec 2.7.1 Oursorcing- typo- change to Outsourcing. > >sec 2.7.2.2 >last para: change Salability to Scalability > > >-- >------------------------------------------------------------- >Tex Texin cell: +1 781 789 1898 mailto:Tex@XenCraft.com >Xen Master http://www.i18nGuy.com > >XenCraft http://www.XenCraft.com >Making e-Business Work Around the World >-------------------------------------------------------------
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