[Bug 3287] Clarity of language in the abstract

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3287





------- Comment #3 from karl@w3.org  2006-07-24 01:26 -------
I guess this is the last version?
http://www.w3.org/International/its/itstagset/itstagset.html#introduction

Yes my concerns are addressed except one. Do not start both in abstract and
introduction with "this document". It's a common mistake from W3C editors, we
already know that it's about this document ;) look at my example when I had
started to rewrite the intro. :)

for the rest thanks.

Received on Monday, 24 July 2006 01:26:44 UTC