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[Bug 3287] Clarity of language in the abstract

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Date: Mon, 24 Jul 2006 01:26:37 +0000
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------- Comment #3 from karl@w3.org  2006-07-24 01:26 -------
I guess this is the last version?

Yes my concerns are addressed except one. Do not start both in abstract and
introduction with "this document". It's a common mistake from W3C editors, we
already know that it's about this document ;) look at my example when I had
started to rewrite the intro. :)

for the rest thanks.
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