[Bug 3318] Clarify "within text" data category

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3318





------- Comment #3 from fsasaki@w3.org  2006-07-08 23:19 -------
(In reply to comment #2)
Would be fine with me. See minor editorial change proposal below.

> The "Elements within text" data category is text structure-oriented.
> We need to clarify the definition:
> 
> Current text (http://www.w3.org/TR/its/#within-text-definition):
> 
> "The data category elements within text expresses information about how
> elements should affect the flow of the content. In this context the flow of the
> content represents how the nodes of the elements should be treated as a single
> unit for linguistic purposes. Sometimes, a flow can be nested within another
> one. The values associated with this data category are:"
> 
> Proposed text:
> 
> "The data category elements within text expresses information about how text
> parts that go together from a linguistic viewpoint (e.g. sentences, or
> paragraphs) are affected by elements. For example, the content of the <strong>
> element in XHTML should not be separated from the text of its parent element,
> in the other hand the content of the <fn> element in DITA is independent from
> the content of its parent element. The values associated with this data
> category are:"
> 
"of its parent element, in the other hand" -> "of its parent element. On the
other hand"

Received on Saturday, 8 July 2006 23:19:59 UTC