[Bug 3287] Clarity of language in the abstract

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3287

           Summary: Clarity of language in the abstract
           Product: ITS
           Version: LastCall
          Platform: All
               URL: http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-its-20060414/#abstract
        OS/Version: All
            Status: NEW
          Keywords: editorial
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: ITS tagset
        AssignedTo: fsasaki@w3.org
        ReportedBy: karl@w3.org
         QAContact: public-i18n-its@w3.org


[[[
Abstract

This document defines data categories and their implementation as a set of
elements and attributes called the Internationalization Tag Set (ITS). ITS is
designed to be used with schemas to support the internationalization and
localization of schemas and documents. An implementation is provided for three
schema languages: XML DTD, XML Schema and RELAX NG. The document provides
examples of how ITS can be used with existing vocabularies. Feedback is
especially appreciated on the general design of ITS, and on the design of the
individual data categories.]]]


I suggest to rewrite a bit this introduction.

“Internationlization Tag Set (ITS) defines data categories and their
implementation as a set of elements and attributes. ITS is designed to be used
with schemas to support the internationalization and localization of schemas
and documents. Three implementations (XML DTD, XML Schema and RELAX NG) are
provided and examples show how ITS can be used with existing vocabularies.”

Remove the part about the feedback, the status section is here for that.

Received on Tuesday, 16 May 2006 06:56:37 UTC