Re: Feeback on tutorials

Hi Richard, all,

Thanks for the mail, I'm fine with your changes.

- Felix

Richard Ishida wrote:
> Hi Felix,
> 
> Thanks for your comments.  Responses below...
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> Richard Ishida
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>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: public-i18n-geo-request@w3.org 
>> [mailto:public-i18n-geo-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Felix Sasaki
>> Sent: 01 June 2005 17:59
>> To: GEO
>> Subject: Feeback on tutorials
>>
>>
>> Hi Richard,
>>
>> Here is some feedback on the Bidi Tutorial:
>>
>> - "With logical ordering text is stored in memory in the 
>> order in which it would normally be typed (and usually 
>> pronounced)": Delete "(and usually pronounced)", because the 
>> relation of characters to pronounciation is rather weak 
>> (except for IPA or SAMPA).
> 
> Not in Arabic and Hebrew, but in fact the *logical* order typically *is*
> close to the pronounced order.  In fact, the keyboarded order may often be
> more different (eg. if South-Asians are using an IME they can type in visual
> order, but have the codes arranged logically).  That's why I say 'normally'
> and 'usually'.  
> 
>> - "Putting markup around the comma is a bit like cracking an 
>> egg with a hammer in this case.": That's great!
>> - "they create states with invisible boundaries": you should 
>> explain "states".
> 
> hmm.  Ok changed to 'contexts'
> 
> 
>> - "CSS provides properties to specify bidirectional 
>> behaviour." You should say s.t. about the CSS version.
> 
> Ok. done
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