- From: Steven Pemberton <steven.pemberton@cwi.nl>
- Date: Wed, 26 Nov 2008 15:47:55 +0100
- To: ishida@w3.org, www-html-editor@w3.org, public-i18n-core@w3.org
Thanks for the comment. We added a few more examples, and also tightened up this wording. Please see the latest draft at http://www.w3.org/MarkUp/2008/ED-xhtml-access-20081023/ for details. Best wishes, Steven Pemberton On Wed, 06 Aug 2008 09:13:52 +0200, <ishida@w3.org> wrote: > > Comment from the i18n review of: > http://www.w3.org/MarkUp/2008/WD-xhtml-access-20080526/ > > Comment 5 > At > http://www.w3.org/International/reviews/0806-xhtml-access/Overview.html > Editorial/substantive: E > Tracked by: RI > > Location in reviewed document: > General > > Comment: > Phrasing such as 'assigning an accessibility mapping' or 'the document > focus or an inspection focus' are not very clear, and there is no > clarification or links to definitions. A few more examples, and > explanations of how they affect the user experience (not just code > snippets), would also be welcome. > > >
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