- From: Martin Duerst <duerst@it.aoyama.ac.jp>
- Date: Thu, 22 Nov 2007 10:43:32 +0900
- To: "Richard Ishida" <ishida@w3.org>, <public-i18n-core@w3.org>
Hello Richard, Some comments I wrote up a while ago, without completely reading the document: "or the Devanagari X." -> "or the Devanagari character X." (otherwise, some people may read this as 'Devanagari' being usable for denoting single characters). "If you are to correctly decode the sequence" -> "If you want to correctly decode the sequence" ('are to' sounds a bit impersonal to me, also it's more difficult for foreign speakers than 'want'; otherwise, avoid using 'you' (probably better in this case, as it is about something very mechanical), e.g. changing to "In order to correctly...") Regards, Martin. At 00:29 07/11/16, Richard Ishida wrote: > >http://www.w3.org/International/wiki/What_is_encoding > >Please take a look and comment by/on Tuesday. > >Thanks, >RI > >============ >Richard Ishida >Internationalization Lead >W3C (World Wide Web Consortium) > >http://www.w3.org/International/ >http://rishida.net/blog/ >http://rishida.net/ > > #-#-# Martin J. Du"rst, Assoc. Professor, Aoyama Gakuin University #-#-# http://www.sw.it.aoyama.ac.jp mailto:duerst@it.aoyama.ac.jp
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