- From: Martin Duerst <duerst@it.aoyama.ac.jp>
- Date: Thu, 22 Nov 2007 10:43:32 +0900
- To: "Richard Ishida" <ishida@w3.org>, <public-i18n-core@w3.org>
Hello Richard,
Some comments I wrote up a while ago, without completely reading the document:
"or the Devanagari X." -> "or the Devanagari character X."
(otherwise, some people may read this as 'Devanagari' being
usable for denoting single characters).
"If you are to correctly decode the sequence" ->
"If you want to correctly decode the sequence"
('are to' sounds a bit impersonal to me, also it's more
difficult for foreign speakers than 'want'; otherwise, avoid
using 'you' (probably better in this case, as it is about something
very mechanical), e.g. changing to "In order to correctly...")
Regards, Martin.
At 00:29 07/11/16, Richard Ishida wrote:
>
>http://www.w3.org/International/wiki/What_is_encoding
>
>Please take a look and comment by/on Tuesday.
>
>Thanks,
>RI
>
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>Richard Ishida
>Internationalization Lead
>W3C (World Wide Web Consortium)
>
>http://www.w3.org/International/
>http://rishida.net/blog/
>http://rishida.net/
>
>
#-#-# Martin J. Du"rst, Assoc. Professor, Aoyama Gakuin University
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