Re: [jlreq] modified textfor 4.1.2 (#118)

> You seem to have changed what it was saying in Japanese: The original text implies that there are other categories of heading or title text-on-its-own-line, but that for often-used Large, Medium and Small titles, [...etc]. With your change, the text is implying that these three levels are somehow important to JIS X 4051 and required definition on their own. I would think the three sizes are basically chosen as representative of many possible variations, so I kind of preferred the old text "as follows".

Original motivation of this change is mark "three" and list of heading levels as informative or one possibility, and to state definitions in following sections are described based on three levels.
On this point, this section is not to state JIS X 4051 lists three levels by 'as follows', but to list names of three levels to be used later.

> Aside from that, I agree with "have to have" changing to "requires", and changing "may have" to "may optionally include"

(not sure for where you agreed, but) 'have' are widely used in JLReq document, I'd keep as is.

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