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Tweak some informative wording for clarity. (bug 6768) (whatwg r3158)

From: poot <cvsmail@w3.org>
Date: Mon, 1 Jun 2009 18:29:00 +0900 (JST)
To: public-html-diffs@w3.org
Message-Id: <20090601092900.6A1E52BC9E@toro.w3.mag.keio.ac.jp>
Tweak some informative wording for clarity. (bug 6768) (whatwg r3158)
http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=6768

Diffs for this change per section: 
http://people.w3.org/mike/diffs/html5/spec/Overview.1.2312.html#network-states

http://people.w3.org/mike/diffs/html5/spec/Overview.diff.html
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/html5/spec/Overview.html?r1=1.2311&r2=1.2312&f=h
http://html5.org/tools/web-apps-tracker?from=3157&to=3158

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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/spec/Overview.html,v
retrieving revision 1.2311
retrieving revision 1.2312
diff -u -d -r1.2311 -r1.2312
--- Overview.html	1 Jun 2009 08:54:21 -0000	1.2311
+++ Overview.html	1 Jun 2009 09:27:28 -0000	1.2312
@@ -17958,9 +17958,10 @@
  }
 &lt;/script&gt;</pre>
 
-  </div><p class="note">To express the type of a <a href="#media-resource">media resource</a>
-  to allow the user agent to avoid downloading resources it can't
-  render, authors can use the <code><a href="#the-source-element">source</a></code> element's <code title="attr-source-type"><a href="#attr-source-type">type</a></code> attribute.<h5 id="network-states"><span class="secno">4.8.10.4 </span>Network states</h5><dl class="domintro"><dt><var title="">media</var> . <code title="dom-media-networkState"><a href="#dom-media-networkstate">networkState</a></code></dt>
+  </div><p class="note">The <code title="attr-source-type"><a href="#attr-source-type">type</a></code>
+  attribute of the <code><a href="#the-source-element">source</a></code> element allows the user agent
+  to avoid downloading resources that use formats it cannot
+  render.<h5 id="network-states"><span class="secno">4.8.10.4 </span>Network states</h5><dl class="domintro"><dt><var title="">media</var> . <code title="dom-media-networkState"><a href="#dom-media-networkstate">networkState</a></code></dt>
 
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