Tweak some informative wording for clarity. (bug 6767) (whatwg r3157)

Tweak some informative wording for clarity. (bug 6767) (whatwg r3157)
http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=6767

Diffs for this change per section: 
http://people.w3.org/mike/diffs/html5/spec/Overview.1.2311.html#index
http://people.w3.org/mike/diffs/html5/spec/Overview.1.2311.html#status-of-this-document
http://people.w3.org/mike/diffs/html5/spec/Overview.1.2311.html#a-vocabulary-and-associated-apis-for-html-and-xhtml
http://people.w3.org/mike/diffs/html5/spec/Overview.1.2311.html#editor-s-draft-date-1-january-1970
http://people.w3.org/mike/diffs/html5/spec/Overview.1.2311.html#attr-time-datetime
http://people.w3.org/mike/diffs/html5/spec/Overview.1.2311.html#htmltimeelement

http://people.w3.org/mike/diffs/html5/spec/Overview.diff.html
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/html5/spec/Overview.html?r1=1.2310&r2=1.2311&f=h
http://html5.org/tools/web-apps-tracker?from=3156&to=3157

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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/spec/Overview.html,v
retrieving revision 1.2310
retrieving revision 1.2311
diff -u -d -r1.2310 -r1.2311
--- Overview.html 31 May 2009 08:45:28 -0000 1.2310
+++ Overview.html 1 Jun 2009 08:54:21 -0000 1.2311
@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@
    <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="a-vocabulary-and-associated-apis-for-html-and-xhtml">A vocabulary and associated APIs for HTML and XHTML</h2>
    <!--ZZZ:-->
    <!--<h2 class="no-num no-toc">W3C Working Draft 23 April 2009</h2>-->
-   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="editor-s-draft-date-1-january-1970">Editor's Draft 31 May 2009</h2>
+   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="editor-s-draft-date-1-january-1970">Editor's Draft 1 June 2009</h2>
    <!--:ZZZ-->
    <dl><!-- ZZZ: update the month/day (twice), (un)comment out
     <dt>This Version:</dt>
@@ -245,7 +245,7 @@
   track.
   <!--ZZZ:-->
   <!--This specification is the 23 April 2009 Working Draft.-->
-  This specification is the 31 May 2009 Editor's Draft.
+  This specification is the 1 June 2009 Editor's Draft.
   <!--:ZZZ-->
   </p><!-- UNDER NO CIRCUMSTANCES IS THE PRECEDING PARAGRAPH TO BE REMOVED OR EDITED WITHOUT TALKING TO IAN FIRST --><!-- relationship to other work (required) --><p>This specification is also being produced by the <a href="http://www.whatwg.org/">WHATWG</a>. The two specifications are
   identical from the table of contents onwards.</p><!-- UNDER NO CIRCUMSTANCES IS THE FOLLOWING PARAGRAPH TO BE REMOVED OR EDITED WITHOUT TALKING TO IAN FIRST --><!-- UNDER NO CIRCUMSTANCES IS THE PRECEDING PARAGRAPH TO BE REMOVED OR EDITED WITHOUT TALKING TO IAN FIRST --><!-- context and rationale (required) --><p>This specification is intended to replace (be a new version of)
@@ -13483,10 +13483,10 @@
    <p>For dates before the introduction of the Gregorian calendar,
    authors are encouraged to not use the <code><a href="#the-time-element">time</a></code> element, or
    else to be very careful about converting dates and times from the
-   period to the Gregorian calendar. This is complicated by the way
-   the Gregorian calendar was phased in at different times in
-   different countries, ranging from part way through the 16th century
-   all the way to early in the 20th.</p>
+   period to the Gregorian calendar. This is complicated by the manner
+   in which the Gregorian calendar was phased in, which occurred at
+   different times in different countries, ranging from partway
+   through the 16th century all the way to early in the 20th.</p>
 
   </div><p>The <dfn id="attr-time-datetime" title="attr-time-datetime"><code>datetime</code></dfn>
   attribute, if present, must contain a <a href="#valid-date-or-time-string">valid date or time
@@ -64472,6 +64472,7 @@
   Benjamin Hawkes-Lewis,
   Bert Bos,
   Bijan Parsia,
+  Bil Corry,
   Bill Mason,
   Bill McCoy,
   Billy Wong,

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