mike: minor tweak for clarification, in language about escaping text spans in Syntax section from poot on 2009-07-20 (public-html-diffs@w3.org from July 2009)

From: poot <cvsmail@w3.org>
Date: Tue, 21 Jul 2009 00:20:57 +0900 (JST)
To: public-html-diffs@w3.org
Message-Id: <20090720152058.3E7A42BCA1@toro.w3.mag.keio.ac.jp>
mike: minor tweak for clarification, in language about escaping text
spans in Syntax section

http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/html5/markup/Overview.html?r1=1.327&r2=1.328&f=h

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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/Overview.html,v
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--- Overview.html 20 Jul 2009 14:56:48 -0000 1.327
+++ Overview.html 20 Jul 2009 15:18:31 -0000 1.328
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 <body>
 <div class="head">
 <h1>HTML 5: The Markup Language</h1>
-<h2>Editor&#8217;s Draft <em>20 July 2009</em>
+<h2>Editor&#8217;s Draft <em>21 July 2009</em>
 </h2>
 <dl>
 <dt>Latest Editor&#8217;s Draft:</dt>
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
     
     
     <p>
-        This document is the 20 July 2009 Editor&#8217;s Draft of 
+        This document is the 21 July 2009 Editor&#8217;s Draft of 
         <cite>HTML 5: The Markup Language</cite>.
       </p>
     <p>

Index: syntax.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/syntax.html,v
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--- syntax.html 20 Jul 2009 14:56:54 -0000 1.15
+++ syntax.html 20 Jul 2009 15:18:32 -0000 1.16
@@ -821,17 +821,7 @@
       that is not itself in an
       <a href="syntax.html#syntax-escape">escaping text span</a>,
       and ends at the next
-      <a href="syntax.html#syntax-escape-end">escaping text span end</a>.
-      There cannot be any
-      <a href="syntax.html#syntax-charref">character references</a>
-      inside an
-      <a href="syntax.html#syntax-escape">escaping text span</a>;
-      any sequences of characters within an
-      <a href="syntax.html#syntax-escape">escaping text span</a>
-      that may look like
-      <a href="syntax.html#syntax-charref">character references</a>
-      are in fact not 
-      <a href="syntax.html#syntax-charref">character references</a>.</p>
+      <a href="syntax.html#syntax-escape-end">escaping text span end</a>.</p>
     <p>An
       <dfn id="syntax-escape-start">escaping text span start</dfn>
       is the
@@ -864,6 +854,18 @@
          <a href="syntax.html#comment-end-delimiter">comment end delimiter</a>.</li>
        </ul>
      </div>
+     <p>There cannot be any
+      <a href="syntax.html#syntax-charref">character references</a>
+      inside an
+      <a href="syntax.html#syntax-escape">escaping text span</a>;
+      any sequences of characters within an
+      <a href="syntax.html#syntax-escape">escaping text span</a>
+      that may look like
+      <a href="syntax.html#syntax-charref">character references</a>
+      are in fact 
+      <a href="syntax.html#syntax-text">text</a>,
+      not 
+      <a href="syntax.html#syntax-charref">character references</a>.</p>
      <p>An
      <a href="syntax.html#syntax-escape-start">escaping text span start</a>
      may share its

Index: spec.html
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diff -u -d -r1.51 -r1.52
--- spec.html 20 Jul 2009 14:56:53 -0000 1.51
+++ spec.html 20 Jul 2009 15:18:32 -0000 1.52
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 <body>
 <div class="head">
 <h1>HTML 5: The Markup Language</h1>
-<h2>Editor&#8217;s Draft <em>20 July 2009</em>
+<h2>Editor&#8217;s Draft <em>21 July 2009</em>
 </h2>
 <dl>
 <dt>Latest Editor&#8217;s Draft:</dt>
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
     
     
     <p>
-        This document is the 20 July 2009 Editor&#8217;s Draft of 
+        This document is the 21 July 2009 Editor&#8217;s Draft of 
         <cite>HTML 5: The Markup Language</cite>.
       </p>
     <p>
@@ -1777,17 +1777,7 @@
       that is not itself in an
       <a href="#syntax-escape">escaping text span</a>,
       and ends at the next
-      <a href="#syntax-escape-end">escaping text span end</a>.
-      There cannot be any
-      <a href="#syntax-charref">character references</a>
-      inside an
-      <a href="#syntax-escape">escaping text span</a>;
-      any sequences of characters within an
-      <a href="#syntax-escape">escaping text span</a>
-      that may look like
-      <a href="#syntax-charref">character references</a>
-      are in fact not 
-      <a href="#syntax-charref">character references</a>.</p>
+      <a href="#syntax-escape-end">escaping text span end</a>.</p>
     <p>An
       <dfn id="syntax-escape-start">escaping text span start</dfn>
       is the
@@ -1820,6 +1810,18 @@
          <a href="#comment-end-delimiter">comment end delimiter</a>.</li>
        </ul>
 </div>
+     <p>There cannot be any
+      <a href="#syntax-charref">character references</a>
+      inside an
+      <a href="#syntax-escape">escaping text span</a>;
+      any sequences of characters within an
+      <a href="#syntax-escape">escaping text span</a>
+      that may look like
+      <a href="#syntax-charref">character references</a>
+      are in fact 
+      <a href="#syntax-text">text</a>,
+      not 
+      <a href="#syntax-charref">character references</a>.</p>
      <p>An
      <a href="#syntax-escape-start">escaping text span start</a>
      may share its

Index: W3C-ED.css
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diff -u -d -r1.1 -r1.2
--- W3C-ED.css 20 Jul 2009 14:56:49 -0000 1.1
+++ W3C-ED.css 20 Jul 2009 15:18:32 -0000 1.2
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@
 
 
 body {
-  background-image: url(http://www.w3.org/StyleSheets/TR/logo-ED);
+  background-image: url(logo-ED.png);
 }
 
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