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@@ -1098,17 +1098,19 @@
 
   <h2 id=changelog><span class=secno>5 </span>HTML&nbsp;5 Changelogs</h2>
 
-  <p>The changelogs in this section mostly indicate what has been changed.
-   Rationale for changes can be found in the <a
+  <p>The changelogs in this section indicate what has been changed between
+   publications of the HTML&nbsp;5 drafts. Rationale for changes can be found
+   in the <a
    href="http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-html/"><code>public-html@w3.org</code></a>
    and <a
    href="http://lists.whatwg.org/pipermail/whatwg-whatwg.org/"><code>whatwg@whatwg.org</code></a>
    mailing list archives and to some extent in the <a
    href="http://blog.whatwg.org/category/weekly-review">This Week in
    HTML&nbsp;5</a> series of blog posts. Many editorial and minor technical
-   changes are not included in these changelogs. If you are an implementor of
-   HTML&nbsp;5 you are hereby strongly advised to follow the specification
-   more closely.
+   changes are not included in these changelogs. I.e. implementors are
+   strongly encouraged to follow the development of the main specification on
+   a frequent basis so they become aware of all changes that affect them
+   early on.
 
   <p>The changes in the changelogs are in rough chronological order to ease
    editing this document. The changelogs are placed in reverse chronological
@@ -1141,7 +1143,7 @@
     now affects its intrinsic dimensions.
 
    <li>The behavior of the <code>type</code> attribute of the
-    <code>link</code> has been clarified.
+    <code>link</code> element has been clarified.
 
    <li>Sniffing is now allowed for <code>link</code> when the expected type
     is an image.
@@ -1248,7 +1250,7 @@
    <li>If the <code>alt</code> attribute is omitted a <code>title</code>
     attribute, an enclosing <code>figure</code> element with a
     <code>legend</code> element descendant, or an enclosing section with an
-    associated must be present.
+    associated heading must be present.
 
    <li>The <code>irrelevant</code> attribute has been renamed to
     <code>hidden</code>.
@@ -1356,7 +1358,8 @@
     updated.
   </ul>
 
-  <p>The changes since the publication on 22 January 2008 are as follows:
+  <p>The changes between the 22 January 2008 and 10 June 2008 publications
+   are as follows:
 
   <ul>
    <li>Implementation and authoring details around the <code>ping</code>

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@@ -998,17 +998,18 @@
     
     <h2 id="changelog">HTML&nbsp;5 Changelogs</h2>
 
-    <p>The changelogs in this section mostly indicate what has been changed.
-    Rationale for changes can be found in the
+    <p>The changelogs in this section indicate what has been changed between
+    publications of the HTML&nbsp;5 drafts. Rationale for changes can be
+    found in the
     <a href="http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-html/"><code>public-html@w3.org</code></a>
     and
     <a href="http://lists.whatwg.org/pipermail/whatwg-whatwg.org/"><code>whatwg@whatwg.org</code></a>
     mailing list archives and to some extent in the
     <a href="http://blog.whatwg.org/category/weekly-review">This Week in HTML&nbsp;5</a>
     series of blog posts. Many editorial and minor technical changes are not
-    included in these changelogs. If you are an implementor of HTML&nbsp;5
-    you are hereby strongly advised to follow the specification more
-    closely.</p>
+    included in these changelogs. I.e. implementors are strongly encouraged
+    to follow the development of the main specification on a frequent basis
+    so they become aware of all changes that affect them early on.</p>
 
     <p>The changes in the changelogs are in rough chronological order to
     ease editing this document. The changelogs are placed in reverse
@@ -1035,7 +1036,7 @@
      <li>The <code>poster</code> attribute of the <code>video</code> element
      now affects its intrinsic dimensions.</li>
      <li>The behavior of the <code>type</code> attribute of the
-     <code>link</code> has been clarified.</li>
+     <code>link</code> element has been clarified.</li>
      <li>Sniffing is now allowed for <code>link</code> when the expected
      type is an image.</li>
      <li>A section on URLs is introduced dealing with how URL values are to
@@ -1110,7 +1111,7 @@
      <li>If the <code>alt</code> attribute is omitted a <code>title</code>
      attribute, an enclosing <code>figure</code> element with a
      <code>legend</code> element descendant, or an
-     enclosing section with an associated must be present.</li>
+     enclosing section with an associated heading must be present.</li>
      <li>The <code>irrelevant</code> attribute has been renamed to
      <code>hidden</code>.</li>
      <li>The <code>definitionURL</code> attribute of MathML is now properly
@@ -1189,8 +1190,8 @@
      updated.</li>
     </ul>
     
-    <p>The changes since the publication on 22 January 2008 are as
-    follows:</p>
+    <p>The changes between the 22 January 2008 and 10 June 2008 publications
+    are as follows:</p>
     
     <ul>
      <li>Implementation and authoring details around the <code>ping</code>

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