[Bug 9883] Notes on and request for references for Section 1.4: History


Ian 'Hixie' Hickson <ian@hixie.ch> changed:

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--- Comment #1 from Ian 'Hixie' Hickson <ian@hixie.ch>  2010-08-27 18:38:17 ---
(In reply to comment #0)
> Ian, these comments are meant in the spirit of the "Reviewing HTML5" page on
> the WHATWG wiki: http://wiki.whatwg.org/wiki/Reviewing_HTML5.  My main foci
> were clarity and external citations.


> 1. It would be very helpful to have citations to relevant documents in this
> section. Those reading a "history" section would most likely want to follow
> links to source documents to evaluate them for themselves. At the very least,
> please add references to the mentioned specs: HTML 3, 3.2, 4, XML, XHTML,
> XHTML2, the DOM specs, and XForms. Those would, of course, be non-normative.

That would be a really long list of references. I'm not sure it's really worth

> 2A. The following sentence is a bit awkward and confusing: "At this early
> stage, while the draft was already publicly available, and input was already
> being solicited from all sources, the specification was only under Opera
> Software's copyright." It is unclear to me what this actually means. Does it
> essentially mean that Opera led the effort to develop a new specification,
> soliciting input from the public and making the draft publicly available.  

This sentence was very carefully crafted. :-) It means exactly what it says,
which is that the copyright was Opera's, specifically without talking about who
was "leading" the effort, which is a much harder question to answer.

> 2B. It would be helpful in the aforementioned paragraph to indicate a date.
> Clearly, it's between 2004-2006 (inclusive).

The previous paragraph says 2003; is that not sufficient?

> 3. "The copyright was subsequently amended to be jointly owned by all three
> vendors, and to allow reuse of the specification." How does one "amend"
> copyright?

With great difficulty, it turns out.

> Was this in terms of amending an application to a country's
> copyright office? Was copyright reassigned to WHATWG? Was the copyright notice
> merely changed to state the three vendors?

The latter, through complicated negotiations that I'd really rather not relive
by describing them in the spec. :-)

> 4. Putting this section in the active voice would benefit its overall clarity. 

Actually the passive voice was an intentional choice to enable the events to be
described without attributing responsibilities.

> Take for example, the following phrase: "The idea that HTML's evolution should
> be reopened was tested at a W3C workshop in 2004." Who did the "testing"? If
> part of the goal of this section is to tell a joint W3C/WHATWG history of
> HTML5, this goal would be aided by not hiding agency by using the passive
> voice.

The original goal of this specification was to clarify who owned the copyright,
and to give a little background, without giving credit or blame for specific
actions. This is a goal that unfortunately conflicts with the goal of having
good clear writing in the active voice.

I haven't made any changes to the text, though I did look at each comment you
made  sorry! I hope you don't mind. This is an area with somewhat sensitive
political implications.

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