[Bug 13439] Editorial changes to Track element (2 of 3)

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=13439

--- Comment #3 from Silvia Pfeiffer <silviapfeiffer1@gmail.com> 2011-08-14 05:58:06 UTC ---
(In reply to comment #2)
> What is the problem in the original text that the suggested text fixes?

Very similar to bug 13440, see
http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=13440#c3 .

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