Re: GRDDL spec editing

On Tue, 2006-10-17 at 09:43 -0500, Dan Connolly wrote:
> Harry and everybody,
> ... I'm a bit behind on integrating a bunch of 
> edits
> that Murray sent me over the weekend. I still hope to get to them today.

OK, I did something with the edits Murray sent me
(i.e. the version of Tue, 17 Oct 2006 10:20:37 -0400,
Murray; I assume that subsumes the 3 previous iterations.0

Here's the whole changelog for the last week or so...

http://www.w3.org/2004/01/rdxh/spec

Revision 1.111  2006/10/17 20:34:56  connolly
- work in Murray's text on 6. Transformations
  including Faithful Rendition Guarantee" subsection.
  It feels a little too strong, but I think it's
  worth getting other opinions.
- move XProc section from intro to 6. transformations
- don't talk about a link type under 6. transformations
- replace "use of document() is an error" by "watch out" note
  in security section

Revision 1.110  2006/10/17 20:14:16  connolly
paste in GRDDL schema/profile

Revision 1.109  2006/10/17 20:11:41  connolly
- worked in Murray's text on section 5 XHTML profile
- more use/mention tweaking in defns; moved N3 to a linked document

Revision 1.108  2006/10/17 20:09:06  connolly
- worked in Murray's text on section 4 valid XHTML
- tweaked some use/mention stuff in some formal bits

Revision 1.107  2006/10/17 20:07:43  connolly
- worked in Murray's text on section 3 XML namespaces, heavily editing
  the section on namespace documents in RDF and XML Schema
- moved from "the GRDDL result" to "a GRDDL result" in section 2 on wf XML
- moved h2 space inside "gen" span

Revision 1.106  2006/10/17 16:06:56  connolly
fix TOC to match section 2 wf XML

Revision 1.105  2006/10/17 16:05:33  connolly
rewrite section 2 on wf XML
based on mail from Murray Tue, 17 Oct 2006 10:20:37 -0400

Revision 1.104  2006/10/13 15:46:05  connolly
re-org TOC: treat the XML case before the DTD-constrained HTML case

Revision 1.103  2006/10/11 14:27:24  connolly
more work on intro, based on MM 4 Oct:
 - remove dc-extract diagram
 - more subheadings in intro

TODO: edit citations for consistency;
cite each concept at 1st occurrence


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