Re: Review of Use-Case Document

On Thu, 2006-08-24 at 17:59 +0100, Harry Halpin wrote:
> Everyone,
>     Since it's the duty of every member of the working group to make
> sure our publications are of the highest quality and readable, please do
> take the spare time read through Editor's Drafts as they are produced.

Yes, quite...

>    Here's my current review of the Use-Case document.

Which one? Which version?

An exemplary review also cites the document you're reviewing by
URI, and if it matters, revision date.

I presume you mean

 http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/grddl-wg/doc43/scenario-gallery.htm
 v 1.9 2006/08/23 13:28:11


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