Re: The RDF Data Cube Vocabulary - W3C Working Draft 12 March 2013

Hi Ulrich,

Sorry to hassle you, but it would be really helpful if you were able to 
let us know if this response was acceptable to you.

Best wishes,
Dave

On 09/05/13 14:38, Dave Reynolds wrote:
> Hi Ulrich,
>
> Thank you again for your comments on the Data Cube Last Call draft.
>
> I just wanted to follow up our discussion to let you know we have made
> the editorial changes we discussed. Details below. The current editor's
> draft is at [1].
>
> Please can you let us know if you are satisfied with this response.
>
> On 08/04/13 17:54, Ulrich wrote:
>> Overall: yes the comments are editorial and aimed at helping newcomers
>> such myself grasp the concept. All your comments I don't address
>> specifically are fine and make sense.
>
> Thanks.
>
>> To ease understanding, the most effective change I suggest is moving the
>> part of section 7 without sub-heading forward.
>
> Good suggestion, done.
>
> On 05/04/13 12:13, Ulrich wrote:
>  >   * Link to the SDMX User Guide 2.1, especially /2.2 Background/ eases
>  >     understanding for newcomers.
>
> DONE Added reference within introductory section on SDMX.
>
>  >   * Make examples earlier.
>
> Added a complete RDF rendering of the running example as an Appendix
> and linked that from section (now) 5.4.
>
>  >   * I'd recommend avoiding the term "non-statistical data" as I have
>  >     /only/ heard it in the context of official statistics. Or what
>  >     exactly makes data statistical? (see e.g. section 5.1)
>
> DONE (removed use of the term)
>
>  >   * The slice example is good, but could do with a shorter sentence.
>
> Fixed.
>
>  >   * Example 5.3 -- /can we have some actual final code in there? /Even
>  >     if it anticipates some sections.
>
> Done via the new appendix with a forward reference.
>
>  >   * Example 6.3 I find it hard to see where we define the nested
>  >     structure of the data - include reference to example 4 or call it
>  >     something more telling than "example".
>
> Retitled.
>
>
> Best wishes,
> Dave
>
> [1] https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/gld/raw-file/default/data-cube/index.html
>

Received on Tuesday, 14 May 2013 07:47:10 UTC