Minor text corrections

Good morning.
 
The EXI specification is a fine document, and together with its primer
is a clear and rigorous presentation of the standard.
 
While reading, I noted a few minor spelling mistakes and similar issues.
In case they haven't already been noticed and fixed in a new draft, I've
listed them here. Nothing here is intended to change the meaning of the
specification. Feel free to incorporate the suggestions, or ignore them,
or make different changes.
 
--- PRIMER
 
_'by example', second note
   Attribute date="2007-09-12"
  Content column says correctly "0 1B 0 1" 
  Note column says "0 uint 1 1 (value hit)"
  but it should say "0 uint 0 1 (value hit)"
 
--- SPECIFICATION
 
_5.4 EXI Options
 Last paragraph, definition of valuePartitionCapacity option
 Replace "enitiries" with "entries"
 
_Last paragraph before 6.1
 Replace "effect " by "affect"
 
_Introductory paragraph of 8.5 Schema-informed grammars
 Replace "schema-deviated" with "schema-derived"
 
_8.5.4.1.6 Element Terms
 Replace "itself if was" with "itself if it was"
 
_10 Conformance
 Review use of English throughout this section,  particularly:
  plural and singular forms, and
  the phrase "that EXI stream decoders are prepared with"
 
_B.1 Document Information Item
 [unparsed entities] Delete the last occurrence of "to".
 
_B.11 Namespace Information Item
 Replace "ismaps toa NS event" with "maps to a NS event"
 
_E Deriving Character Sets from XML Schema Regular Expressions
 In sentence 2 replace "lexically matches" with "lexically match"
 
_E Deriving Character Sets from XML Schema Regular Expressions
 In the notes on rules [3] and [4] replace "causes to conclude the
charset of the regExp"
 with "causes the charset of the regExp"

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Hope this helps,
 
 Simon
 
Simon Parker
Software Consultant
PolarLake
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Received on Monday, 6 April 2009 09:28:15 UTC