- From: Simon Parker <simon.parker@polarlake.com>
- Date: Thu, 2 Apr 2009 10:56:17 +0100
- To: <public-exi-comments@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <FA4B6A60F23D824CBB1C4EBC5412A52FFD23C3@bonito.polarlake.com>
Good morning. The EXI specification is a fine document, and together with its primer is a clear and rigorous presentation of the standard. While reading, I noted a few minor spelling mistakes and similar issues. In case they haven't already been noticed and fixed in a new draft, I've listed them here. Nothing here is intended to change the meaning of the specification. Feel free to incorporate the suggestions, or ignore them, or make different changes. --- PRIMER _'by example', second note Attribute date="2007-09-12" Content column says correctly "0 1B 0 1" Note column says "0 uint 1 1 (value hit)" but it should say "0 uint 0 1 (value hit)" --- SPECIFICATION _5.4 EXI Options Last paragraph, definition of valuePartitionCapacity option Replace "enitiries" with "entries" _Last paragraph before 6.1 Replace "effect " by "affect" _Introductory paragraph of 8.5 Schema-informed grammars Replace "schema-deviated" with "schema-derived" _8.5.4.1.6 Element Terms Replace "itself if was" with "itself if it was" _10 Conformance Review use of English throughout this section, particularly: plural and singular forms, and the phrase "that EXI stream decoders are prepared with" _B.1 Document Information Item [unparsed entities] Delete the last occurrence of "to". _B.11 Namespace Information Item Replace "ismaps toa NS event" with "maps to a NS event" _E Deriving Character Sets from XML Schema Regular Expressions In sentence 2 replace "lexically matches" with "lexically match" _E Deriving Character Sets from XML Schema Regular Expressions In the notes on rules [3] and [4] replace "causes to conclude the charset of the regExp" with "causes the charset of the regExp" --- Hope this helps, Simon Simon Parker Software Consultant PolarLake 80 Harcourt Street Dublin 2, Ireland Phone +353 1 449-1075 Fax +353 1 449-1011 Web http://www.polarlake.com/
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