- From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
- Date: Wed, 25 Oct 2017 15:54:16 -0500
- To: Shadi Abou-Zahra <shadi@w3.org>, "Sinclair, Norah M" <norah.sinclair@amac.gatech.edu>, Sharron Rush <srush@knowbility.org>, "jgreen@visa.com" <jgreen@visa.com>, "Pulido, Jesus" <jesus.pulido@amac.gatech.edu>
- Cc: Sylvie Duchateau <sylvie.duchateau@snv.jussieu.fr>, "Bakken, Brent" <brent.bakken@pearson.com>, "public-eo-archive@w3.org" <public-eo-archive@w3.org>
[+ public-eo-archive] Shadi, Thanks for clarifying that the stories are ready to go from your perspective. +1 on making the names more internationally diversified Norah, thanks for your editing work on these! Exciting to see them revised! Best, ~Shawn On 10/25/2017 9:07 AM, Shadi Abou-Zahra wrote: > Hi Norah, > > Just making sure that you are not waiting on me with this. I reviewed these stories while you were developing them, and am very happy with them as they currently are. My only concern is that the names seem a little less internationally diversified (eg. 4 of these 8 names sound "western" to me). Not sure if this is only my impression, and how to best balance out the names. > > Best, > Shadi > > > On 11/10/2017 21:03, Sinclair, Norah M wrote: >> Hello Review Team, >> >> >> If you have not had the chance to review the revised Stories of Web Users, please try to do so by Friday. >> >> >> Thanks to Eric, you can see the stories in the new website prototype here: >> >> >> http://w3c.github.io/wai-website/people-use-web/user-stories/ >> >> Comment on drafts posted on github Revised web stories <https://github.com/w3c/wai-people-use-web/issues/51> >> >> >> Thanks very much. >> >> >> Regards, >> >> Norah >> >> >> *Norah Sinclair * >> Instructional Technology and User Support Specialist >> ** >> AMAC Accessibility Solutions and Research Center >> Georgia Institute of Technology | College of Design >> 512 Means Street | Suite 250 | Atlanta, GA 30318 >> >> phone 404.894.7432 >> www.amacusg.org <http://www.amacusg.org/> >> >> >> ------------------------------------------------------------------------ >> *From:* Sinclair, Norah M <norah.sinclair@amac.gatech.edu> >> *Sent:* Friday, September 22, 2017 2:09 PM >> *To:* Sharron Rush; jgreen@visa.com; shawn@w3.org; Pulido, Jesus >> *Cc:* shadi@w3.org; Sylvie Duchateau; Bakken, Brent; EOWG (E-mail) >> *Subject:* How People with Disabilities Use the Web - stories of web users ready for review >> >> Hello Review Team, >> >> Draft revisions of stories of web users are ready for your review and feedback. This resource is the main focus for update of the larger “How People with Disabilities Use the Web.” >> >> The goals of the revisions are to: >> • Simplify & Tersify — Make content simple and brief. Cut words. Cut Sentences. >> • Bullets & Graphics — Break up passages into bullets when appropriate. Suggest graphics. >> • Front-loaded Action — Use active voice, and action statements. >> >> Drafts are posted on github Revised web stories <https://github.com/w3c/wai-people-use-web/issues/51> >> >> Please provide your feedback and suggestions by Monday Oct. 2^nd by commenting on the github issue (preferred) or by email. The titles have not been changed other than using a first name, but may need to be changed. Thanks so much for your assistance with this. >> >> Regards, >> Norah >> >> >> *Norah Sinclair * >> Instructional Technology and User Support Specialist >> ** >> AMAC Accessibility Solutions and Research Center >> Georgia Institute of Technology | College of Design >> 512 Means Street | Suite 250 | Atlanta, GA 30318 >> >> phone 404.894.7432 >> www.amacusg.org <http://www.amacusg.org/> >
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