charter 2 - chairs' edits done, time for ETF to take over

Hi Rachel,

The draft charter 2 with edits from us three is already up in the wiki:

   http://www.w3.org/2007/eGov/IG/wiki/Charter2

Thanks Kevin for providing more edits.

I would need to get a final version no later than July 14th.

I would also need to know if I'll get a wiki version or if someone  
from ETF will produce the final _required_ HTML. I'm happy to help and  
provide a template if someone from ETF wants to give it a try.

There are still some comments I left in there enclosed in @@. Several  
are just editorial, but want to highlight some here and we can discuss  
on the group call next Wed.

* @@Web Access, Development and Interoperability@@
Still not sure about TF2 name, and seems a bit too broad to me yet

* Strategies and goals sections
I left comments from Ian at the beginning for ETF to consider. I think  
text below is much more detailed but some ideas are probably somewhat  
duplicated and Ian's text is better summarized?
Couldn't come up with anything better, something in the middle might  
be it, hope ETF could do.

* Dependencies
Comment not about text but for me to re-check with all of those to be  
listed there.
If anybody else has input on groups/organizations we should add/remove  
from there, please shout.

* Decision and Patent sections
Please, leave them at that. That's the text it _must_ appear in there.

* About this Charter
Last paragraph should be left untouched, can be move around within  
that section though.
I'm not sure we need so much background on Charter 1 in there.


If you have any questions, please ping me at anytime. I hope we could  
spend a significant amount of time discussing more about the charter  
on the upcoming group call.

Looking forward to this as the first deliverable of the ETF! :)


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Jose M. Alonso <josema@w3.org>    W3C/CTIC
eGovernment Lead                  http://www.w3.org/2007/eGov/

Received on Thursday, 2 July 2009 22:17:02 UTC